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Codex Denied Ara

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To submit the homeworld of the Chos Garga
  • Image Credit: X
  • Canon: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: Chos Garga
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Planet Name: Ara
  • Demonym: Aran
  • Region: Tingel Arm
  • System Name: Zarriah
  • System Features:
    • System - Zarriah [Red Sun]
    • Ara - Orbital Position: First Planet from Sun
    • System - Other Celestial Bodies:
      • Gas Giants:
        • Colruturn [Third Planet from Sun]
        • Tobarvis [Fifth Planet from Sun]
      • Terrestrial:
        • Varater [Second Planet from Sun |Inhabitable]
        • Numerous Unnamed Moons
    • Ara- Length of a Day: 46 Hours
      • Daylight: 33 Hours
      • Nighttime: 13 Hours
    • Ara- Days in a Year: 278
    • Ara- One Moon: Beria
    • System - Anomalies: Ruined Space Station Near System Edge
  • Location: Oshetti IV Hex
  • Major Imports: Food, Water, Slaves
    • The Chos Garga only participate in the importation of the above from their conquered worlds.
  • Major Exports: N/A
    • The Chos Garga do not participate in any form of exportation with their conquered subjects or any major factions that have attempted peace talks.
  • Unexploited Resources:
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
  • Gravity: Standard
  • Climate: Due to its proximity to Zarriah, the planet is incredibly barren, entirely covered with scorching deserts and only the hardiest of plantlife capable of sustaining themselves under the blistering sunlight. Only the life that is naturally born here can survive the burning climate, which is so intense that human flesh can be seared and flayed in seconds by its sand-filled winds.
  • Primary Terrain: The planet is a single biome world, being a canyon pocked desert marked by two perpetual ion storms on the North and South Pole of the planet. Most of the terrain is occupied by the native species, the Chos Garga, and is thus covered with towering idols of industry belching pollution into the air, further preventing the already near-dead chance of vegetation growing.
  • Atmosphere: Type-1
LOCATION INFORMATION
  • Capital City: Ender Atmos - A massive walled city of pyramids, patches of artificial oases, and all-together alien geometry, Ender Atmos is the primary bastion for the Chos Garga. It features large railways, markets, workshops, and numerous entrances to the subterranean constructs beneath the sands.
  • Planetary Features:
    • Sand Seas: Similar to worlds such as Tatooine, coating the landscape are massive stretches of boiling sands that will drain the will from even the hardiest of travelers.
    • Canyons: Breaking up the stretches of sand are deep caverns that resemble battle scars. Most are only a few miles deep, but some descend for unmeasured distances, their bases invisible to the eye.
    • The Storm Fronts: Located at the North and South Poles of the planet, the Storm Fronts are massive patch perpetual ion storms that have scarred the landscape to unrecognizable lengths. Absolutely nothing lives at these locations and they have been cordoned off from the Chos Garga. Secretly, they are used as methods of executions for political and social enemies in the Chos Society, with the individuals thrown into the storms from passing ships.
  • Major Locations:
    • Evranta Edobus: The Slave City - or the Well of Labor - Evranta Edobus is essentially a giant factory designed to work both Chos slaves and the Chos Jin until death. In this factory, the workers mine the planet's available resources and and forge weapons for their overlords.
    • Deta Icosets: The collective name for the small cities and manors across the planet designed to hold royal families and military generals.
    • Opolk Shord: The primary subterranean outpost to the West of Ender Atmos, Opolk Shord focuses on the study of the planet's interior construct, in hopes of discovering any materials that could be used to advance their conquest of the Galaxy or any new species they could enslave into their ranks.
    • Opolk Grodon: The second and least known of the subterranean outposts to the East of Ender Atmos, Opolk Grodon is the hellpit in which the Chos Garga conduct vicious experiments on their slaves and themselves. While nothing ostensibly useful for the entire species has come out of Opolk Grodon, various enhancements for individuals - usually the
  • Force Nexus: N/A
POPULATION
  • Native Species: Having eradicated all other native life on Ara, the Chos Garga now stand as the only native species on the planet.
  • Immigrated Species: All immigrated species are slaves taken by the Chos and used in experiments and labor. The species include, but are not limited to: Twi'Lek, Togruta, Mirialan, Human, Jawa
  • Population: Heavy - The Chos Garga occupy most of the landscape Ara offers due to their every increasing birth rate, covering approximately 75% of available land.
  • Demographics: 90% Chos Garga, 10% Slave Speices
  • Primary Languages:
    • Tors - The native language of the Chos Garga is a harsh sounding language that produces a deep, rumbling grumble with each word. Despite the relative intelligence of the Chos Garga, the language is of such a primitive structure that many an individual form the impression that the Chos themselves are unintelligent - a mistake they do not get the chance to repeat.
    • Galactic Basic
    • High Galactic
  • Culture:
    • General Life:
    • Religion:
    • Military Life:
GOVERNMENT AND ECONOMY
  • Government:
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  • Freedom & Oppression:
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
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HISTORICAL INFORMATION
 
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[member="Lorale Farmar"]

Awesome sub! Very detailed, however,



Lorale Farmar said:
Region: Tingel Arm
This needs to link to the appropriate sector on the wookie (Tingel Arm)

Also, I would like to suggest linking this:



Lorale Farmar said:
Affiliation: Darth Raptious
To your character sheet or profile for ease of access when it comes to getting in touch with you or finding out more about this character.

Beyond this, again, this is a very nice submission.
 
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Thanks! It's no problem - As long as we have it now. Just one thing:

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Tag me when you're done and I'll get you on your way. All the other edits check out.
 
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BobertEZ BobertEZ

Where are you on this sub? Would you like more time to complete it or would you prefer to have it archived?

If I don't hear anything back within a few days, this submission will be archived for inactivity. If you would like it pulled back out of the archives so that it can be worked on - Please make the request in the Submission-Modification Thread.
 
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