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Draconia

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: I wish to create a planet (And soon Species) that will act as a new area in the galaxy, I plan for this to be a homeworld of a People, and place of refuge. Ultimately I want to add some extra fun and spice On the Galactic Scale. EDIT: To Revamp Information and Pictures. Will also make the page nicer
  • Image Credit: Image taken by me from the game Stellaris.
  • Canon: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: N/A
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Planet Name: Draconia
  • Demonym:
    • Draconian (Native name)
    • Dracon (Shorter name)
    • Gagon (Slur)
  • Region: Unknown Regions
  • System Name: Draconian System
  • System Features:
    • Stars
      • Martoc's Flame (G-Type Yellow Dwarf)
    • Planets
      • Danos (Barren) (1st Orbit Position)
      • Drakk (Cracked) ((2nd Orbit Position))
      • Norcos (Colonized) ((3rd Orbit Position))
      • Draconia (Page Here) (4th Orbit Position)
      • Dracos (Colonized) ((5th Orbit Position))
      • Forconis (Gas Giant) ((6th Orbit Position)) ---Projects Planed---
    • Moons
      • Moro (Draconia's First moon) ((Continental Moon)) (((Colonized Research and Luxury World)))
      • Unaro (Draconia's Secound Moon) ((Forest moon))
    • Asteroids
      • Rocky Revelations (Belt Between 1st and 2nd Orbit Position)
      • Dragon's Edge (Belt Between 5th and 6th)
        • Boros (Largest Mineral Rich Asteroid in the system)
    • Artificial Structures
      • Orbital Ring Dragon
      • Naval Station
  • Location: Here (Planet Already on map This is a revamp/remake)
  • Major Imports:
    • Organic Material
    • Tibanna Gas
    • Plasteel
    • Durasteel
  • Major Exports:
    • Draconion Steel
    • Civilian Ships
    • Civilian Weapons
    • Raw Materials
    • Armor
    • Droids
    • Food
  • Unexploited Resources: Many Unfound material's located throughout the many asteroids and asteroid belts
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
  • Gravity: 1.23 Times Earth Gravity
  • Climate:
    • Within Major Urban Areas (Controlled)
      • Sunny
      • Windy
      • Cloudy
      • Light-Medium Rain
      • Light-Medium Snow
    • Within The wild natural Areas (Non-Controlled)
      • Light-Heavy Rain
      • Light-Heavy Snow
      • Thunder storms
      • Mild Tornados
      • Mild Earth-Quakes
  • Primary Terrain:
    • Urban
    • Plains
    • Ocean
    • Forest
    • Hill
    • Mountains
  • Atmosphere: Type 1 Breathable
  • Size: 2 Times the Size of Earth (25,512 Km Diameter)
LOCATION INFORMATION
  • Capital City: Dragon's Point
  • Planetary Features:
    • Many Large Urban citys: While not the Entire planet is covered in dence citys. Many Large Country Sized City's Exist on the surface. Each City can poke Far into the sky, burrow Deep Underground, Or both. The Exception Is Dragon's Point, which Not only spans a large centrial continet sized area, But also touches the Atmophere at its highest points, and almost reaches the planets mantle At it's lowest.
    • Large Wild lands: A majority of the planet is still covered in lush lands, and is mostly protected from unrelenishable exploitations. Animals Still live in these natrual areas, Mostly Undisturbed
    • Underground Tunnels: Large Underground tunnels are some of the primary ways to transport yourself cheaply from one of the major citys to another in. Used for both Cargo and Personal Transport
    • Under Ground Rail-Jet Transports: Many of the Citys are connected by a large amount of Rail-Jets for Fast transport both Above and Below Ground
  • Major Locations:
    • The Rebuilt Palace-After the Destruction of the Orbital Ring and the Major City Below, the Palace was one of the first things to be rebuilt. Though Now it Lies empty After the Death of the Royal Family, It still stands as a symbol of Pride. One day A new Ruler May take their place in the Throne.
  • Force Nexus (Optional): TBD
    Intent: [ Provide the reasoning and motive for this force nexus. A request for a force nexus may be denied on this premise alone. ]
    Nexus Name: [ Name of the nexus if applicable. ]
  • Nexus Alignment: [ Light, Dark, Neutral, Other (explain). ]
  • Size: [ Small (A small location on a world much like a grove or oasis. Ex. Dark Grove), Medium (A moderately sized area, large compounds, lake, etc Ex. Great Temple), Large (A location that spans a large area, a valley, mountain ranges, etc. Ex. Valley of the Jedi). Planetary (Influences everything on the planet. Ex. Byss). ]
  • Strength: [ How strong is the Nexus? How much influence does it exert on those near it? Weaker nexus are easier to overlook, while stronger ones are impossible to miss. Stronger Nexus will be more closely scrutinized for balance and fairness during judging. Choose one: Weak (A weak influence on the area and the people on it. A fragile nexus that can potentially be altered by people or events, i.e. a lightside nexus could be corrupted by atrocity or a dark side nexus cleansed by the actions of a mass of Jedi.), Moderate (A moderate influence on the area and the people on it. Could be altered with a great enough event.), Strong (A strong influence on the area and the people on it. Powerful enough to be renewed in the event of a great cataclysm, and unlikely to be altered.) ]
  • Accessibility: [ For Small, Medium, or Large Nexus only. Describe logistical information on how easy it is to find/access this location. Is it hidden? Is it isolated from society or is it in the middle of civilization? Is it guarded? Open to the public or private access only? Keep in mind that the Strength of the Nexus above must be reflected in this field. ]
  • Effects: [ What sort of effects does this Nexus confer? An aura of fear? Reinvigorating those on the world? Perhaps it induced tricks of the mind, to test the visitors. These effects can be positive, neutral, or negative, and should reflect the nature and history of the Nexus. ]

POPULATION
  • Native Species: Draconions
  • Immigrated Species: Many
  • Population: Crowded
  • Demographics:
    • Draconian 80%
    • Human-10%
    • Humanoid (Twilek, Duro, ETC)-7%
    • Other-3%
  • Primary Languages:
    • Dracoa (Native)
    • Basic (Immigrated and Adopted)
  • Culture:
    • A warrior/honor LIKE system where anyone can join, provided they meet the requirements
    • All Civilians are required at least 4 years in the militaria, but may be taken at any point in your life between the prime ages of any given species.
    • Each citizen and Civilan is free to start their own jobs, or cultures, and free to practice any religion. Each Citizen May vote for some political leaders (Example: Local Governor, representatives, etc) They are led But a ruling Family.
    • A Member of the planet can only become a citizen After there 4 years in service
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: Democratic Monarchy
  • Affiliation: United Galactic Federation (UGF)
  • Wealth: Wealthy
  • Stability: Low (Current)
  • Freedom & Oppression: People are allowed to vote for most Government Officials, and All are allowed to start their Own shops or create their own homes on bought land. However There are ruled By a king and Royal Kaiser. The royal Kaiser can be obtained Either by right of combat, Or right of succession.
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
  • Military: While a Standard Military is maintained by the planet, The most Notable is a Glorified Mercenary Company called "The Peacekeepers" Which Travel the galaxy to be bought by empires to fight for there goals. In return The Planets gets paid a healthy Sum. Most Peacekeepers are volunteers
  • Technology: Above Standard (Some Advancements)
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The Planet was discovered in the Old Republic Era, but was forgotten with the fall of the Eternal Empire. Only Recently Did These Make their presence Known to the Galaxy at large. It was only after they made there urban centers, colonies the Sibling Planets and start their Military's Did they think they were ready.

The Native Species that the planet is alive, with a living breathing dragon at its core, acting as its heart,and therefore worship the dragon as a form of god. They also believe that when the times comes the planet will crack open to release there god into the open. The largest of all dragons.

After they were found and lost by the old republic era, The made it the focus of there race to expand there ground army, being naturally strong. For over 2000 Years they developed themselves to rival even some of the core worlds, In terms of devolvement, population, and economy.

It was only recently they thought themselves ready, first making contact with the Planet in the nearby Zakuul system, and soon after making an alliance, the rest of the galaxy, seeking refugees from any that were willing to accept there ideals. Which were surprisingly to many to deal with at first. Even now, they are struggling to keep track of all the refuges in the systems, but is slowly making progress to alleviate that problem, with the help of skilled members linked to unification, and unifying the people under the banner of the Newly made Allience
 
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Breaker of Chains
Codex Judge
Tragic Writer Tragic Writer

Alright you've got a pretty solid submission overall here! Good work, especially for something as complex as a planet. There are however a couple things that need to be changed but they're all pretty minor!

First of all in the Out of Character section you're missing both the Links bullet point which should be underneath Permissions and a link to the source for the image in Image Credit. I'm pretty sure it's from Stellaris so just link the game in Image Credit and put the Links bullet point back in and you're good to go for that one.

Second in Population there are two areas that I'd prefer to see a bit more detail in. Specifically in Demographics and especially in Culture. For Demographics, while you are indeed free to have various immigrated species without having to list every single one, given that immigrants compose about half of the population I think just listing one or two of the most common immigrant species would be appropriate to give a better idea of the planet's population. As for Culture this is where you flesh out the unique society, or societies, present on this planet. Even if you do cover this more in detail in a sub for the planet's native population, a summary of what one could expect to see from the population is always needed. Are they a very militaristic and ordered society? Do they have some sort of caste structure or hierarchy based on their ruling monarch? Especially with a high amount of immigrated species, how do they view or interact with the wider galaxy? Just a some more details to get a good sense of the planet's population and how it differs from other worlds.

Finally I would also like to see more detail in the Historical Information section. What happened on the world before and after it was discovered? After it was lost? How did its government form and how did it decide to begin branching out to establish colonies? What drove them to announce their presence to the galaxy once more? These sorts of questions are good to answer and will give more insight to how and why this planet is the way that it is. Just another paragraph or two of detail to flesh out the world's past a bit more really.
 
Added More to History, Culture, and Demographics.
Added Links and Linked the game...Although I am unsure How exactly that would work.
I do thank you for your time And I am looking forward to getting this accepted as a few other things in the worship require this be accepted first.
 
Breaker of Chains
Codex Judge
Tragic Writer Tragic Writer

Yeah I know its a bit weird but it works lol. There are plenty of times when people get their images from a movie and just link the movie's IMDb page for instance.

Alright your edits look pretty good! Just move the Stellaris link up to Image Credit rather than Links and you're good to go!
 
Darth Strosius Darth Strosius
I requested To edit this Page 3 months ago and then I left for a bit. Well I will be honest I don't know if I made and real edits other then the Image and Niceness. Here I believe I am done. SOrry for the wait my dude
 
:: HERO of KORRIBAN ::
Moderator
Tragic Writer Tragic Writer i noticed you have the force nexus as a TBD and then have done nothing with the sections involved with it. Unfortunately either there is a force nexus or there isn’t. We won’t be approving a planet with a TBD.

Here are the options:

1. Fill out the force nexus area and create one on the planet.

2. Place N/A and delete the remainder of the force nexus section as it is optional. You can always request a submission modification if you decide to add it in at a later date.

Once you’ve handled this tag me and I’ll review this again.
 

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