Approved Tech Draconian MKIV Armor

[Tragic Writer]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create the Armor for the 'Strundovah'
• Image Source: Here and Here
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: DRAGONSTAR
• Affiliation: Draconian Armed Forces
• Market Status: Closed Market
• Model: Draconian MKIV Armor
• Modularity: No
• Production: Mass-Produced
• Material:
  • Fyrirdögun
  • Armorweave
  • Seigurium
  • Duraplast/Durasteel
  • Plastoid
  • Draconion Steel

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Main battle Armor
• Weight: Heavy
• Resistances:
  • Energy: Average
  • Kinetic: High
  • Lightsabers: Low
  • Vacuum/pressure: High
  • Gas/Chemical: High
  • Other: Low

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Enclosed Body armor
• Integrated life-support/Rebreathers
• Filtered Air intake
• Magnetic Boots
• HUD
• Integrated Comm's
• Multipurpose backpack included (Can be modified to carry weapons, ammo, air, food, ETC, or a combination of everything)

STRENGTHS

• Provided Filtered Air Intake for constant clean air
• Strong full body armor

WEAKNESSES

• Hud can be shut off by Emp's, or hacked to show false data
• Limited life support- With out an attached air pack, the amount of air in the enclosed suit is very limited, leaving only a few minutes worth of air.

DESCRIPTION
With the immigration of many species (Mostly Humans), the armed forces grew drastically in size and prowess to include these new members of society. While at first, these new members would bring what they had, as there was no standard armor or weapon at the time. However, after many iterations and upgrades comes the first truly standard body armor for the Non-Draconain Inhabitants of Draconia. The armor, developed by DragonStar, was seen as a major advancement, even over the Draconian Body armor at the time of its creation.

 

[Ravenfire]

Tragic Writer

Hi there I will be your judge for this submission.

So two things, first thing, reddit isn't really a great source for images. So I went searching for your image and it seems the artist did post it on twitter here x if you'd please use this instead that would be great.

Second thing balance
Mass 0 0
Average 0 0
Very High +2 +2
Very High +2 +4
Low -1 +3
High +1 +4
Very High +2 +6
Low -1 +5
So your 5 over balanced, so I would suggest either lowing current ratings or creating new ratings to fulfil the requirement.

 

[Tragic Writer]

I made the First link the twitter page, I could not find the second image on twitter so I did leave that one alone, However In the future I will refrain from using reddit links

As for the Stats here is what I did.
-Changed Energy to "Average"
Changed all Very Highs to High
Changed Weight to Heavy (I think that takes a point away)

If Anything remains Please do tell

Tags Ravenfire

 

[Ravenfire]

Tragic Writer

So I didn't realise the second one wasn't part of that first twitter link and did a double check on the second one, found it by the same artist also on twitter here x.

Everything else is fine otherwise.

 

[Tragic Writer]

Damn Not only are you fast, But you are not blind like me. Thank you good sir It is changed

Ravenfire

 

[Ravenfire]

Tragic Writer

I'm just getting through as much of factory as I can so that it's a bit more empty and less overwhelming is all.

Approved.