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Approved Tech Durasteel-560B

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
PHYSICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Alloy
  • Weight: Extremely Heavy
  • Color: Grey Metallic almost Charcoal
  • Resistances:
    • Blasters: Very High
    • Kinetic: Very High
    • Lightsabers: Very Low
    • Ion/EMP: Average
    • Sonic: Average
    • Other: Average
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Durasteel-560B provides a ship with protection from Blasters but more importantly, Kinetic and Physical damage.
STRENGTHS
  • Solid as Solid can be: Often stacked layers upon layers of itself making it the sledgehammer of capital ship alloys
  • Durable Armor: Durasteel 560B makes up the bulk of heavy armor and is resistant to most conventional forms of anti-capital damage as well as raw Physical damage but does have it's weaknesses in EMP and Ion weaponry.
WEAKNESSES
  • Not for the little guys. Ships smaller then a corvette should not use this material as it is too heavy.
  • Strong, but not impenetrable. Continuous damage of any type will eventually bleed through over time, especially so with weapons that are meant to disable electronics like EMP and Ion weapons.
DESCRIPTION
Scarlett Zann needed an extra durable alloy for an ambitious ship design. The alloy needed to not only to take a hit from incoming blasters and missiles, but blunt physical and kinetic damage as well. Ion, EMP, and lightsabers did not matter because by the time these were used against the ship she had in mind, it already be over kill. Basically, this alloy is the standard for her ramming ships.
 
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T E R R A R I S - C O M M A N D
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Scarlett Zann Scarlett Zann

Now much better, than the first version was.
  • About the ratings, There is no "Extremely Low" rating. Please modify them to the right one:
    Resistances: (For each category choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme)
  • In the "Hard Nut to Crack", please modify the description to similar to this (because the "Strong, but..." said the oppositea and it is deceptive):
    Durasteel 560B can resist for a long time to all conventional forms of anti-capital damage as well a raw Physical damage.
  • And please fill in the Image Source field too, with that where you found the art. If you made the art, mention this. But if you found the centre art somewhere else, please link that where you found that art.
 
Scarlett Zann Scarlett Zann

Now much better, than the first version was.
  • About the ratings, There is no "Extremely Low" rating. Please modify them to the right one:
  • In the "Hard Nut to Crack", please modify the description to similar to this (because the "Strong, but..." said the oppositea and it is deceptive):
  • And please fill in the Image Source field too, with that where you found the art. If you made the art, mention this. But if you found the centre art somewhere else, please link that where you found that art.
I think i fixed the second part but not sure.
 
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Scarlett Zann Scarlett Zann

Thank you!
  • Ratings good, however your ratings are underpowered (-4), if you want you can edit
  • Second; it is still too absolute. With this wording you can say, it is able to defend the ship from everything. This is why I ask to reword it.
  • And the third point? Please answer to that too.
 
Scarlett Zann Scarlett Zann

Thank you!
  • Ratings good, however your ratings are underpowered (-4), if you want you can edit
  • Second; it is still too absolute. With this wording you can say, it is able to defend the ship from everything. This is why I ask to reword it.
  • And the third point? Please answer to that too.
okay, if my calculations are correct, it should be -1 now which I would like it to be so it is not perfect. Also, I feel like I changed the second part better this time. And third point, It is custom image but provided the link to the place i made it at and provided the art in the logo.
 
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