Approved Droid E.M.P ELITE Series - "Fleshgait"

[Vergessen Contii]

[Source: https://twitter.com/Xous54]​

SPECIAL FEATURES

• The "Fleshgait" unit is capable of turning invisible with its internal stealth field generator and can produce sonic waves that can potentially vibrate nearby victims until their internal organs rupture.

STRENGTHS

• The droids have high physical resistances and are capable hand-to-hand combatants. Their Beskar claws can cleave through tougher opponents, and their screams can quickly eliminate weak-bodied opponents while vibrating objects to a crumble. Their invisibility is effective until they engage in combat, deactivating once their claws are distended from their palms. The Fleshgait can also pursue prey in little to no light areas with their internal biosensor capabilities.

WEAKNESSES

• Invisibility only persists until the Fleshgait initiates combat by baring their claws. While their physical resistance is sturdy, they have significant weaknesses to thermal and radioactive attacks due to their organic components. The sonic waves they produce can be cancelled out with reliable enough sound suppression technology.

DESCRIPTION
These droids are invisible until instigated. They're abominations of man and machine that operate with no will of their own. Their sonic screams are vocalized in the distorted voices of children, or maidens, or whimpering animals. These vocalizations are intended to cause psychological stress to the enemy while they are subsequently maimed.

 

[MANIAC]

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Nicely made.

• The Image Source(s) field is broken, because of this, I would like to ask you to add the image's link to the template (others usually put this under the picture).
• And the stealth technology is restricted, this means these droids can be only Semi-Unique or Unique. I would like to ask you to modify the Production scale; or remove the stealth technology (if you want to keep the Minor scale).

 

[Vergessen Contii]

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Nicely made.

• The Image Source(s) field is broken, because of this, I would like to ask you to add the image's link to the template (others usually put this under the picture).
• And the stealth technology is restricted, this means these droids can be only Semi-Unique or Unique. I would like to ask you to modify the Production scale; or remove the stealth technology (if you want to keep the Minor scale).

Changed the droid to a semi-unique production, so there'll be around a team of five existing at one time. Source also added!

 

[MANIAC]

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Thank you!

Approved.

 

[John Locke]

Vergessen Contii | MANIAC

I'm pulling this submission because the Shock Drum is classified as a Super Weapon per the wookie article. Please remove it.

You should be able to achieve the required effect of it's sonics with a normal sonic weapon isntead.

Also, we try to avoid absolute language in the submissions in the factory, in particular "

• The "Fleshgait" unit is capable of turning invisible with its internal stealth field generator and can produce sonic waves that vibrate nearby victims until their internal organs rupture." Please alter the wording to include "can produce sonic waves that can potentially vibrate" or wording to a similar effect.

 

[Vergessen Contii]

Vergessen Contii | MANIAC

I'm pulling this submission because the Shock Drum is classified as a Super Weapon per the wookie article. Please remove it.

You should be able to achieve the required effect of it's sonics with a normal sonic weapon isntead.

Also, we try to avoid absolute language in the submissions in the factory, in particular "

• The "Fleshgait" unit is capable of turning invisible with its internal stealth field generator and can produce sonic waves that vibrate nearby victims until their internal organs rupture." Please alter the wording to include "can produce sonic waves that can potentially vibrate" or wording to a similar effect.

Understood! I'll get to fixing the post up sometime today. Hopefully, haha.

 

[John Locke]

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Excellent, this is a wonderful horror and I want to get you back out there as soon as possible.

Please tag me when you've made your changes.

 

[Vergessen Contii]

Vergessen Contii

Excellent, this is a wonderful horror and I want to get you back out there as soon as possible.

Please tag me when you've made your changes.

Changed the "shock drum" components to "sonic weapon" components. I also changed the wording.

And thank you for the compliment! Puts wind straight into my sails, haha.

 

[John Locke]

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Perfect, thanks so much for the quick turn around.

Enjoy!