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Approved Starship "EagleEye" TCV

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Affiliation: Heofon Industries
Manufacturer: Heofon industries
Model: T.C.V. “EagleEye”
Modularity: Systems will be updated as better tech is available.
Production: Unique
Material: Durasteel, transparisteel
Classification:Test Control Vehicle

Length: 90 meters
Width: 35 meters
Height: 15 meters

Armament:
2 Turbolasers
2 laser cannons
2 ion cannons
2 Tractor Beam

Hangar: 1 fighter, designed to carry whatever ship it’s testing

Special Features:
  • Standard Communications Array
  • Escape pods
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Navigational System
  • Advanced Sensor Array
  • Standard Targeting Systems

Maneuverability Rating: 7
Speed Rating: 7
Hyperdrive Class: 2

Strengths:
  • Heavy Sensors: The Miraluka-class is designed to detect and track any non-stealth ship that comes within a thousand meters.The system supports standard array of scanners, as well as every other method of detection
Weaknesses: (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)
  • Shieldless: As the T.C.V. is not meant for combat, and all weapons it contains are meant for testing, the ship forgoes all but the most minimal of shields. In combat, the ship could be easily destroyed.

Description: The EagleEye was made by Heofon Industries for testing new ships. This model houses advanced sensors, Cargo space to hold a small test lab, hangers for test vehicles. and docking ports for escape pods and the occasional ship that doesn't fit in the hanger. while the scanners may be effective and powerful, they are one strength of the ship. Lightly armed, the EagleEye is not meant for combat, and such an encounter would prove disastrous for it.
Development Thread: (Restricted Items require specific development threads. The more posts, the more powerful the submission can be. Links: Banned & Restricted Items)
Intent: To create a ship for use in Dev threads for testing out new tech made by Heofon
Who Can Use This: CEO of Heofon Industries
 
[member="Barkt Melan"]

Ok just a few issues for this otherwise its fine.

First off remove the bit where it can detect any ship. It would not be able to detect stealth ships without proper counter-stealth systems and to have such systems are about as difficult to acquire as stealth systems themselves.

Second there is no heavy connotation for systems, so just leave sensors at advanced.

Third since the idea for this ship is to carry a test squadron I won't ask that you remove your hanger, however, I am going to ask you increase your ships size to either 150 m in length OR you drop the hanger to 1 fighter, its unreasonable for it to carry a squadron at its size.
 
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