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Approved Planet Echoy'la

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Name: JM-357-II, Echoy'la ('mourning,' 'searching,' or 'lost' in mando'a)
Region: Unknown Regions
System: JM-357
Suns: JM-357a
Orbital Position: 2, slightly outside the habitable zone
Moons: Echoy'la has twenty-eight moons, all small and lacking atmosphere, of similar composition to the massive rings. The fourteenth moon, Echoy'la Colony, is hollow, as detailed below. To date, beskar ore has been found only on the fourteenth moon, which once had a large amount, though mining has been ongoing for years.
System Features: The first planet, JM-357-I, is an irradiated rock. Echoy'la, or JM-357-II, is surrounded by a gigantic ring system.
Coordinates: Roughly K-3. Between Bastion and Shusugaunt, within Mandalorian territory.
Rotational Period: 10.5 standard hours
Orbital Period: 1200 local days

Class: Gas giant
Diameter: 120,464km
Atmosphere: Type 2, with layers of Type 1
Climate: Comparable to Bespin, with greater incidence of storms. None of the moonlets have a climate.
Gravity: 1.3 Standard
Primary Terrain: Clouds

Native Species: None
Immigrated Species:
  • Space beldons and colossus wasps common throughout the rings and moonlets
  • Beldons also found in atmosphere
  • Mandalorian human population on the moonlet JM-357-II-14, Echoy'la Colony
Primary Languages: Basic, mando'a
Government: An informal council composed of local leaders of existing Mandalorian clans, such as Ordo, Skirata, and Dem'adas. In most matters, acephalous.
Population: 20,000
Demonym: Echoy'lans
Major Imports: Foodstuffs (though Echoy'la Colony prioritizes self-sufficiency with bedjies and ration converters); spare parts; entertainment
Major Exports: Beskar


Material: Beskar/Mandalorian iron
Amount: Small (Unique and Semi-Unique items only)
Intent and Reasoning: To create the only known source of beskar outside the Manda'yaim system. The story behind this involves the Sith Empire discovering this source and using prisoners of war to exploit it. The planet's location challenges Mandalorian sovereignty and provides a major incentive for other Major Factions to engage. The existence of beskar in this system is not explained, comparable to phrik and cortosis locations being scattered across the galaxy. The improbability of its discovery is the motive for its entire known history. The moon's beskar veins are largely mined out, but experienced locals can usually find a little more for people they like.
Development Thread: Deep Black Sea II: By the Pitiless Stars (80+ posts, discovery and liberation of Echoy'la Colony, ongoing for story purposes)


Affiliation: Mandalorian, Levantine

Major Locations: Echoy'la Colony, a hollow moonlet and former secret prison camp. Echoy'la Colony was outfitted with powerful communications jammers, a gravity well projector, long-range tractor beams, a handful of ion cannons, and intensive beskar mining/refining operations, all designed to contain and make use of a population of twenty thousand Mandalorians captured during the battles of Junction, Toprawa, Concord Dawn and Manda'yaim. Echoy'la Colony was recently liberated and is now self-governing. It remains a hub for beskar prospecting and refining.

Culture: The Echoy'lan culture is derived from three basic veins: prison culture, Mandalorian culture, and deep-spacer culture. The most unforgivable crime is tampering with life support or food provision; insofar as there's any law enforcement, mostly in the form of local clan elders' close associates, it turns a blind eye to the spacing of anyone who interferes with the colony's continued existence. Though clan-against-clan prison dynamics have led to occasional skirmishes, the largely acephalous Mandalorian culture has prevented the post-liberation power vacuum from descending into chaos. (OOC note: the culture has some influences from the Ceres/Belter culture in James S.A. Corey's Leviathan Wakes.)

The population follows Mandalorian culture in most respects. After years of captivity, some elements have come to the fore:
  • Denied armor for years, the Echoy'lans are now very closely associated with their armor, and wear it constantly. They hold even basic aliit'gam in high honor, but prioritize beskar above other materials even more than most Mandalorians.
  • Denied home for years, the Echoy'lans faced a choice after liberation. Many returned to Manda'yaim; others were joined by their families, and by prospectors. Those who stayed prioritize pilgrimage to Manda'yaim when practical.
  • Denied use of their language for years, the Echoy'lans spoke mando'a in secret; their defiance resulted in a population that speaks mando'a fluently, often preferring it to Basic, the language of their captors.
  • Denied connection with their clans for years, the Echoy'lans are perhaps less willing to answer the call of clan leaders. Some have forsaken their old identities and created a Clan Echoy'la. Mandalorians have little patience for self-aggrandizement, and even the leaders of the clans they ascribe to may not be able to sway the Echoy'lans -- other Mandalorians not having experienced what they experienced.

Technology: Comparable to the Outer Rim. Echoy'la is a hub of knowledge on beskar mining and refining.

History: Echoy'la was discovered in the early days of the Sith Empire, during the reign of Empress Desmius, Ashin Varanin. Echoy'la was one of uncharted billions of star systems, and is located just beyond the hyperspace disturbance that makes exploration of the Unknown Regions difficult. It was discovered during the Sith Empire's massive push towards and beyond the Braxant Run, an effort which eclipsed the major Perlemian offensive in success, in ambition, in range, and in the volume of worlds added to the Empire. The effort drew on maps provided by Desmius, who had spent her entire career exploring the Unknown Regions. As the Empire expanded away from its standard resources, however, and known habitable systems failed to meet the need for various ores, exploration efforts began to examine non-habitable systems, many of whom had simply been written off after cursory scans. One of the probes happened to find an unusually dense signature in one of the moons of a gas giant with massive rings. A routine followup lander found traces of mandalorian iron ores.

Unwilling to propagate lightsabre-resistant beskar among her fractious subordinates, and secretly intending to impede and redirect the Empire as a whole, Desmius kept the system's discovery and survey data as confined as possible. When she was deposed at Roche, however, a handful of her senior officers quietly vanished. Too close to her to survive the new regime, but not close enough to get the call to go with her, they set up Echoy'la Colony and staffed it with thirty thousand Mandalorian prisoners of war from various secret jails, such as Jurgoran Prison. Whether the notoriously Mandalorian-friendly Desmius knew about these prisoners is hotly debated in Echoy'la Colony. Suffice it to say, while Varanin's Clan Ordo affiliation can get her a drink just about anywhere in Mando space, she'd be welcomed with about ten thousand shivs on Echoy'la.

During the era of the Republic's expansion into the Unknown Regions, only a handful of strategic worlds were claimed; the Atrisian Empire, thanks to the Klaxxi, also had larger strategic concerns than the millions of difficult-to-reach, non-habitable systems in the region. Occasional scans registered nothing unusual about the system or the gas giant's fourteenth moon, whose dense beskar veins had been partially depleted; between that and the excavation of the subterranean mines, the moonlet's density was marginally less than it had been when first discovered. When coupled with the difference between the mining sensors that had first discovered its significance and the standard scans used by later probes, this led to the moonlet being written off as just another unexceptional little rock.

The prison camp was brutal; over thirty percent of prisoners died while mining and refining beskar, and/or at the hands of the former Sith Empire guards. Much of the refined beskar vanished shortly after the destruction of the Sith Empire, and the refined metal began to pile up, but the prison camp continued to operate until the Levantine Sanctum survey vessel Baobab, commanded by Jorus Merrill, stumbled across it and was promptly trapped. Dragged down by tractor beams, comms jammed and hyperdrive interdicted, the Baobab and its crew had to connect with the Mandalorian prisoners while resisting concerted boarding attempts from the guards. Ultimately, the Baobab was able to liberate Echoy'la Colony, earning the Sanctum a place in the Echoy'lans' hearts. This closeness was aided by the presence of several Mandalorians on the survey ship's crew, including Chief Engineer [member="Anija Ordo"], beskarsmith [member="Ijaat Akun"], Security Chief [member="Ermac Laith"] and former Mand'alor [member="Mia Monroe"].

Though Echoy'la is obviously Mandalorian-affiliated, its extreme remoteness makes it vulnerable to interference and potential control from other powers. Meanwhile, the Echoy'lans are bracing themselves for a potential 'gold rush.' They are unwilling to surrender what control they've gained over their home.

Notable PCs: None
Intent: To create the only known source of beskar outside the Manda'yaim system. The story behind this involves the Sith Empire discovering this source and using prisoners of war to exploit it. The planet's location challenges Mandalorian sovereignty and projected power capabilities, and provides a major incentive for other Major Factions to engage.
 
Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
[member="Jorus Merrill"]

The planets location does not make it very lost or remote, it is near mandalorian territory easily and the only other faction that could try and dominion the world is the Republic. The Imperial Remnant could if they really wanted to maybe but no other faction on the board could go after the world to get them to engage. That is is no where near sith territory makes me want to see more in the history of how it was kept from others. Yes the data was restricted, from the empire but the world still has other groups close to it. The Mandalorians, the Republic, the Dominion these ones would have been looking, would have been exploring. Even the Atrisian Empire would have been able to look and be within proximity when they reached Schesa.

I would like the history to reflect more of this.
  • What the sith were doing that far out of their territory
  • Why it has not been discovered by the other groups in proximity

The beskar is being discussed still
 
[member="Matsu Ike"]

That location is inside the hyperspace disturbance that walls off the Unknown Regions. It's also right beside the old boundaries of the Sith Empire, which did as much expansion RP in that direction as the Republic, Atrisian Empire and One Sith put together. There's also the coming map restructuring to consider; that's one reason I chose the location I did, within easy expansion range of multiple major factions. If that's the sticking point, I'm fine with adjusting the location to be in striking range of the current territory of some or all of the One Sith, Republic, Shadow Empire, Imperial Remnant, and/or Primeval. That said, I'll start editing as requested.

As for the beskar, the dev thread is almost twice the length of the recently posted standard for restricted materials, including beskar, with an average post length three or four times larger than the average post in a standard development thread. In effect, we've done up to five times as much work as required by the current standard. If the Codex has a problem granting submissions that meet or exceed current, posted standards, I'm fine with waiting a little while for the Codex to reexamine the benchmarks of those standards. That's not me asking for this to be archived, just recognizing that you're engaged in discussion behind the scenes.
 
Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
[member="Jorus Merrill"]

Thank you for waiting

The discussion for it came down to one thing. The work for it, not in question, the quality, the effort not in question. In the end the question of Why? Mandalorian Iron is strong but it is only really great in the hands of the mandalorians. Others might get lucky, they might be able to get some benefit from it but as much as the mandalorians beskarsmiths. Another faction having it means they'll have a bunch of metal they might only get half the quality from. The beskar is denied on the grounds only one faction would be able to actually use it and it would detract from the uniqueness of their system.
 
[member="Matsu Ike"]

In that case, I'm requesting an alternate judge, because that ruling contradicts the newly posted standard, not to mention invalidates the entire plotline of the thread. If location's the sticking point, I'll reiterate that I'm completely fine with adjusting the location. But furthermore, what's done with Echoy'la and its beskar is an IC matter, and any potential uses and abuses would be the factory's problem and jurisdiction. This would include everything you mentioned about uniqueness and access to beskar refinement knowledge. Fundamentally, though, this is about creating a disagreement between posted requirements and judges' decisions, which is the definition of an arbitrary double standard. I'm asking for a new judge.
 
[member="Jorus Merrill"]
Rather than second chance this, I've taken this on.

I am going to allow this only because you have already done the dev thread. However, I do wish you would have contacted us beforehand to discuss this.

Edits have been made, I see, based on our Skype discussion.

Beskar is not something which should be widely available, and because it is a loophole it will not be available any longer for new Codex planets.

The rarity of the items are to be noted here. Since it cannot be worked by anyone who is not a Mandalorian expert this should not be a major issue.

If this planet is used as a pawn in some 'clever' move by anyone, it will be reassessed.

With this in mind, [member="Matsu Ike"] did the right thing by questioning this. It is an item which needed further interpretation, and that now will be done.
 
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