Edge Blacker Than The Blackest Black Times Infinity

[Darth Carnifex]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4CSFkjPm0A0​

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So it's been a good six months or so since I drummed one of these bad bois up, and a lot has happened in that time with my one and only character of supreme edge and gore. So again I'd like to ask the community to tell me what they think of the character, anything that can be improved on, or anything that they particularly don't like about him or the way I portray him.

Tasty memes are welcomed, and ego stroking is mandatory.

 

[Vustia]

So edgy I cut myself

 

[Darth Carnifex]

Let the wound fester and putrefy

[member="Vustia"]

 

[Zef Halo]

Not as much as a feedback, but have you thought of making a massive change with him ? Perhaps, even killing him ? As far as I know, he died once or almost died or something. About feedback, I've always liked the character as he feels natural to the Star Wars universe. Probably one of the most natural characters to the universe on Chaos.

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[Vustia]

[member="Darth Carnifex"]

OK DAD

 

[Darth Carnifex]

Perhaps, even killing him ? As far as I know, he died once or almost died or something.

Kaine is essentially the Star Wars equivalent of a fantasy Lich, in that even though his physical form may be completely annihilated his spirit/consciousness can circumvent the Netherworld of the Force and return to the material plane in a fresh body crafted via Sith Alchemy after a period of a few months or even up to an entire year or so.

And I haven't really thought of making any super duper big changes to him at this moment, but my muse is super duper fluid so I'm often subject to grandiose whims.

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[Vex Pendel]

Seems dope to me though.

 

[Darth Carnifex]

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[Darth Ferus]

Edgelord.

 

[Vex Pendel]

Spoiler: Ow the edge

Edge memes are comedy gold.

But in actuality, I like the character. Only got a few things to talk about.

17 titles Not a complaint, just blew my mind a bit haha. Big repertoire.

I went through the bio trying to find things to critique, but honestly couldn't find anything that stood out to me. Plenty of detail on anything someone might want to know about the character. Only things I could consider "missing" in any extent would be a list of relationships, a list of roleplays (though I'm sure you have somewhere else), and miscellaneous optional flavor stuff like character theme music in the bio.

Overall, great job on the edge character!

 

[Atlas Kane]

Can't exactly think of Chaos without thinking of Kaine in it. He's one of the few constants that you can count on to be entertaining, imo. While I will remember Emperah Kaine the best, as he's left the most memorable impression, it's been fun seeing what stuff the character does and how he changes, while still remaining similar to his base qualities. #EpicanthixPowah

Also, well played with the music choice.

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

Inb4 Hiss Hiss can give a shout out for Ghost.

 

[Darth Carnifex]

and miscellaneous optional flavor stuff like character theme music in the bio.

It'd be hard to fit the entire Death Metal genre into a single post.

But if I were to focus on one particular song, it'd have to be this I suppose: Click

[member="Vex Pendel"]

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Darth Carnifex"]
Well, you ask often enough, so I may as well do this once.

Pros:

• You're a good writer, and your descriptions of Kaine and his actions are well composed.
• Kaine is one of the few truly malevolent bad guys on the board, no kindly Sith here!
• You're skilled at building up a dynasty and a planet.
• You use Sabaton in your posts.

Cons:

• The character is pretty one-note from what I've seen. There's little nuance, it's just grim Sith war raaagh.
• Having the character die and just keep coming back...it's a pretty cheap get out of jail free. It's making a dramatic story cheaper.
• Though this is more the writer, there's no permanency in any of the things he does. He hops from faction to faction from cause to cause with little long term commitment.
• Uses inferior music at times.

 

[Darth Carnifex]

Having the character die and just keep coming back...it's a pretty cheap get out of jail free. It's making a dramatic story cheaper.

A consequence of the site's policy on character death, I'm afraid.

Although I have tried to mold it into that "undying enemy" trope, but in the future I do plan to craft an item similar to a Lich's phylactery that will allow those opposing him to put him down for good if they destroy it.

Uses inferior music at times.

:L

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

 

[Darth Ferus]

[member="Darth Carnifex"]

OO oh. Let me help! I love making item weaknesses.

 

[Veino Garn]

Top Sith Villain of Chaos.

Pretty much hands down, but not much else for Kaine. Has he considered taking up any non-evil hobbies?

 

[Darth Carnifex]

GET YOUR GRUBBY MITTS OFF OF MY PHYLACTERY, FERUS

>:L

[member="Darth Ferus"]

 

[Nima Tann]

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[Darth Carnifex]

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