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Approved NPC Emerald Squadron

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Create an elite star fighter squadron for future RP
  • Image Credit: N/A
  • Role: Elite star fighter squadron
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: Leader
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Unit Name: Emerald Squadron
  • Affiliation: The Underground ( Veino Garn Veino Garn )
  • Classification: Fighter squadron
  • Description: Originally the premier fighter squadron for the Sakura Empire, led by the adopted daughter of the Empress herself. They have fought in almost every campaign alongside their Alliance counterparts and with allies across the Galaxy. They fly under the banner of the Crown Princess, a light green Sakura flower. They always enter battle with high morale and extreme focus in any task or situation. They know each other well and can read one another's actions in combat.
COMBAT INFORMATION:
  • Unit Size: Small
    • 12 fighters
  • Unit Availability: Unique
  • Unit Experience: Veteran
  • Equipment:
  • Combat Function:
    • Star Fighter
    • Escort (including long-range)
    • Hit and run
    • Long range reconnaissance
    • Ground support
Strengths:
  • Highly trained and can prove to be effective as a unit while in combat. Also able to adapt rapidly to changing situations.
  • Extremely effective against other fighters with their specialized craft along with their training and experience.
Weaknesses:
  • Primary focus is anti-fighter combat, lacking the heavier weapons to tackle larger targets.
  • Vulnerable if left alone and without support.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Formed by the Crown Princess and her interest in becoming a pilot and rapidly put together with externally supplied ships. They quickly rose to prominence within the Sakuran ranks, their presence in space or supporting ground troops boosted the morale of friendly forces. Time and time again they proved themselves as the premier fighter squadron earning admiration and praise. The current ships came about after Princess Kira was shot down on the planet of Saijo, and specially designed for survivability. For the majority of their operational history, they were stationed aboard the Sakuran Imperial Fleet flagship, the AIN Nagato.

But now, with the resurgence of The Underground, they have made the collective choice to set out on their own and support the group in their efforts. Now, striken from their home fleet and effectively operating within a new organization, the members of Emerald Squadron await what their future holds!
 
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Kairi Leidias

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Hey! Sorry for the extensive delay! Queen stuff, ya know?

Anyways, looking over this submission - all looks well, except one thing!

  1. Affiliation seems to be with the Underground, but the fighter linked is for other Factions.
Otherwise, love the sub! <3 Keep up the hard work!

Kimiko Taiyou Kimiko Taiyou
 
Kairi Leidias | Kimiko Taiyou Kimiko Taiyou

Nice work - There are just a few things to go over here.

In regards to the new fighter you submitted it seems that there are 16 Units. This is fine for a Semi-Unique Factory Submission but the sizing for a Codex NPC Sub is a little different.

Unit Size: [ This is how many individuals make up a single unit. Choose from Small (each unit is small, comprising a dozen members or less), Medium (moderately sized units, often specialized), Large (many individuals, often compromising the rank and file). ]

So, for it to be a Small Codex NPC Unit the guide is 12 or less. You've got 16. You can either change the unit size to Medium or lessen the number of NPCs within this Codex Sub to 12.

I would suggest lessening the number to 12 as the most common make up for a squadron in Canon is also 12. It would also be the simplest fix. Once that's handled I can get this passed through.

Tag me when you're ready for me to take another look.
 
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