Factory Denied Escrima Shock Sticks

[Taji Nelson]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Flesh out the Galaxy's Melee Weapons.
• Image Source: Here
• Canon Link: (Please link the canon link if applicable canon item.)
• Permissions:
• Primary Source:

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Nelson Prototyping
• Affiliation: Closed Market / Thieves Guild
• Model: TN-20 Escrima Stick
• Modularity: Drug could be changed, Voltage could be adjusted. Explosive could be removed.
• Production: Mass Produced
• Material: Phrik, Cortosis, Durasteel, Leather. Circuitry, Rubber Grip.

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Escrima Stick
• Size: Small
• Weight: Light

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Biometric Scanner

STRENGTHS

• Lightsaber Resistant
• Shocking: Can knock a person out with Electricity.
• Can Inject Sedative Drugs
• Override Taji can employ on all of them.

WEAKNESSES

• Not Lethal: The weapon isn't the deadliest in the Galaxy and is primarily made for Nonlethal Endeavours.
• No Security Mechanisms: Can be used by anyone and stolen and turned against user.
• Power Supply: The power supply must be replaced every so often.
• Therrmite Charge: A Thermite Charge that will detonate if the drug in them is changed.

DESCRIPTION

An Escrima Stick created by Taji as a means to provide the Galaxy with more equipment that they could use in non lethal methods to take down their opponents. This was one of his first innovations that he made for himself. These were the first type of non lethal melee weapon Taji created.

 

[Jorik Valnora]

under review

 

[Jorik Valnora]

Hey there, Taji Nelson

First off, thanks for taking the time to use the factory! I'll be helping you out through the review and approval process

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Flesh out the Galaxy's Melee Weapons.
• Image Source: Here

The link you provided for the image you used doesn't actually credit to the artist/owner of the image. If you'd be so kind as to swap it out with THIS link so we can ensure proper credit is given to to the content owner, that would be greatly appreciated.

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Nelson Prototyping
• Affiliation: Closed Market / Thieves Guild

If you would be so kind as to link the Thieves Guild for Affiliation that would be greatly appreciated

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Biometric Scanner

If you'd be so kind as to link the "Biometric Scanner," that would be awesome

STRENGTHS

• Lightsaber Resistant
• Shocking: Can knock a person out with Electricity.
• Can Inject Sedative Drugs
• Override Taji can employ on all of them.

WEAKNESSES

• Not Lethal: The weapon isn't the deadliest in the Galaxy and is primarily made for Nonlethal Endeavours.
• No Security Mechanisms: Can be used by anyone and stolen and turned against user.
• Power Supply: The power supply must be replaced every so often.
• Therrmite Charge: A Thermite Charge that will detonate if the drug in them is changed.

This strength and weakness seem to be counterproductive to one another. With how it is currently written, it reads as though this weapon actually has 2 different security mechanisms, yet you say it has none. Can you please clarify what you mean here?

DESCRIPTION

An Escrima Stick created by Taji as a means to provide the Galaxy with more equipment that they could use in non lethal methods to take down their opponents. This was one of his first innovations that he made for himself. These were the first type of non lethal melee weapon Taji created.

Can you give me a little bit more information on how this weapon actually works?

Please remember to tag me with any edits or clarifications you make for this sub.

 

[Jorik Valnora]

Taji Nelson

Can I get a status update on this?

 

[Taji Nelson]

Archive this please Jorik Valnora

 

[Jorik Valnora]

Archived per writer request