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Approved Tech FAE/SW-05 “Mayari” Transcendent Disruptor Cannon

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a starfighter and vehicle grade disruptor cannon which is roughly equivalent to a medium laser cannon in net firepower.
  • Image Source: N/A
  • Canon Link: N/A
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  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: First United Astral Engineering
  • Affiliation:
  • Market Status: Open-Market
  • Model: FAE/SW-05 “Mayari” Disruptor Cannon
  • Modularity: Yes
    • May be Installed on Small Craft, Vehicles, Capital Ships, Ground Emplacements, and Larger Platforms.
    • Single, Twin, Triple, Quad, Sextuple, Octuple, and Dectuple Weapon Mountings/Barbette Emplacements, Ship/Vehicle/Emplacement Size Dependent.
    • Emplacements/Mountings May be Fitted with Armor, Shields, Additional Sensors, Defensive Equipment, and Other Misc. Systems/Equipment, Ship/Vehicle Size Dependent.
  • Production: Minor
  • Material: Various Electronic Components, Various Computer Components, Dallorian Alloy, Duraplast, Various Disruptor Components, Hyperbaride, Durasteel, Titanium, Laminanium, Alusteel, Agrinium, Faraday Cage Construction Around Internal Circuitry and Electronics, Dallorian Alloy
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Transcendental Disruptor Cannon - Roughly Comparable to a Medium Laser Cannon
  • Beam Color/Appearance: Magenta - Coruscating Visual Texture
  • Size: Average
  • Weight: Average
  • Ammunition Type: Tibanna Gas
  • Ammunition Capacity: Small
    • 50 Shots per Tibanna Gas Cell
  • Effective Range: Long Range
  • Rate of Fire: Low
  • Damage Output: Extreme
  • Recoil: High
SPECIAL FEATURES
STRENGTHS
  • Extreme Firepower: In terms of net firepower, the Mayari is roughly equivalent to a medium laser cannon, firing at less than half the rate with thrice the energy output per shot. It is capable of independently neutralizing targets along a vehicle, small craft, and sub-capital scale, though is also relatively effective when deployed en masse against capital vessels. Of note, it has extreme power for a weapon of an already famously lethal class. Being a Class-D disruptor, it is capable of inflicting atomic deletion on targets within its scale and below. Correspondingly, the Mayari has overkill capability when used against infantry and other small targets, though its rate of fire does present challenges in such engagements.
  • Reflection: Encased within a weak containment field by design which lends the Mayari’s beams a distinct magenta color, in the manner of a particle beam weapon, the energized bolts are engineered to explode upon contact with shields, thereby preventing reflection from Xythan Force and other reactive shield technologies. However, this does not nullify their purely defensive qualities.
  • Range: The Mayari has a long effective range for a disruptor. However, this is no greater than standard laser cannon range, as disruptors are on average, short-ranged weapons. In essence, the Mayari is not a sniping or standoff weapon, in spite of its long range for a disruptor.
WEAKNESSES
  • Heat Management: The persistent demands of cooling and heat management make the Mayari a slower firing weapon over a sustained period than its mechanical rate of fire would suggest. In essence, while the Mayari has no physical recoil, its recoil manifests in the heat generated by firing the weapon, forcing the operator to fire it in short bursts with breaks in between for cooling. However, long bursts are possible at the potential cost of a lengthy heat discharge cycle, during which the cannon can not be fired for a set period of time, especially after an especially demanding salvo.
  • Limited Capacity: With the exception of larger platforms, such as capital ships, superheavy vehicles, and bombers, most small craft and vehicles, including starfighters, interceptors, medium-sized walkers, and repulsor craft, can only carry one tibanna gas cell for each cannon. As such, keeping the weapons operational demands frequent resupply, whereas most conventional laser cannons retain an effectively unlimited supply of ammunition.
  • Strafing Runs: The Mayari is generally a poor choice for close air support duties, as its low rate of fire, even for a disruptor, precludes the weapon from casting forth a large volume of fire in a short period of time, which is often necessary in order to minimize the risk to the pilot in executing strafing runs.
DESCRIPTION
Conceived and designed by First United Astral Engineering as a slower firing and harder hitting alternative to its laser cannons, the Mayari is the company’s first foray into true disruptor technology. Fitting neatly into the category of a Class-D disruptor, the Mayari is extremely lethal even for a weapon of an already destructive class, though it also has many of the same shortcomings, including a finite capacity, and low rate of fire, and high recoil which manifests largely in the form of rapid overheating.

In spite of these limitations, the designers hope that the Mayari will establish itself as a reliable weapon for small craft, emplacement turrets, and vehicles, though its effectiveness in the field remains to be seen.
 
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Cool concept, however, I am going to ask for the removal of the Anti-Ray Shield energy weapon usage with the submission. As linked, it is a theoretical/hypothetical based. When looking further into the "technology type" on the Wookipedia, it specifically states, that these items are listed as the following quote.
refers to technology that, while mentioned in-universe, was either given under a fictitious context—such as a sarcastic reference or made clear to not exist—or was actually planned to be developed yet was never created.

Furthermore, this is used on a disruptor weapon. While the site acts on the premise of the victim calling what hits they do or do not take, having a shield penetrating disruptor weapon which in theory would destroy a massive area of a vessel with a singular hit. Specifically a Class-D that is supposed to break things down to such a low level, that in Canon, its listed as illegal. (Yes, I know that doesn't matter in the great context of things, but my point stands) It is also not listed as Chaos technology. But Wookipedia tech. There by continuing its status as a "Sarcastic reference"

Secondly, I have to point something out that doesn't make sense.

Reflection: Encased within a weak containment field by design which lends the Mayari’s beams a distinct magenta color, in the manner of a particle beam weapon, the energized bolts are engineered to explode upon contact with shields, thereby preventing reflection from Xythan Force and other reactive shield technologies.
That is not how Xythan Force Shields operate. They reflect ALL energy back. So even if there were to be an explosive causation of the casing being weaker, the explosion itself would also be reflected back towards the origin. There are other means of getting through a Xythan Shield. As this is an energy based weapon, at best, the explosive function of the bolt would reduce the chance of the disruptor shot from returning "completely." As in, the explosion would still be reflected back but not as far as it would have been if it were a full powered bolt.

Range: The Mayari has a long effective range for a disruptor. However, this is no greater than standard laser cannon range, as disruptors are on average, short-ranged weapons. In essence, the Mayari is not a sniping or standoff weapon, in spite of its long range for a disruptor.
All cool to have it have a longer range than a different disruptor. However, you are currently over by one rating. Due to that one overage in count, I recommend reducing the range Rating to match that with the strength listed here.

Extreme Firepower: In terms of net firepower, the Mayari is roughly equivalent to a medium or heavy laser cannon,
Intent: To create a starfighter and vehicle grade disruptor cannon which is roughly equivalent to a medium laser cannon in net firepower.
Classification: Anti-Ray Shield Transcendental Disruptor Cannon - Roughly Comparable to a Medium Laser Cannon
The following three quotes need to be fixed just a little bit. You mention it being a medium laser cannon, but then make mention in the extreme rating of firepower to be Medium OR Heavy laser cannons. Just pointing it out so it can be cleaned up a little bit and not confuse a reader.
 
The Anti-Ray Shield properties have been scrubbed from the submission.

I'd like to keep the Anti-Reflection strength if possible. I added a sentence to clarify its purpose a bit more, but it was never intended as a "means of getting through a Xythan Shield".

According to my own calculations, the ratings are balanced as they currently stand.

I removed any mention to it being a heavy laser cannon.

Vora Kaar Vora Kaar
 
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