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Approved Starship Fallax class freighter

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Freighter
  • Length: Main cabin; 35 meters. Engines; 50 meters
  • Width: 45 meters
  • Height: 10 meters
  • Armament: Average
    • Two heavy laser cannons
    • Two quad bolt cannons
    • Four concussion missle racks
    • One blaster cannon
  • Defenses: Average
  • Squadron Count: None: 1
  • Maneuverability Rating: Average
  • Speed Rating: High
  • Hyperdrive: Average: 1
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Hyperdrive
  • Life support
  • Crew quarters
  • Medical bay
  • Escape pods 2x
  • Holonet transceiver
  • Electronics
  • Amenities (bathrooms, cafeteria, etc.)
  • Engine bay
  • Water reservoir and filtration system
  • Shield generators
  • Sensor array
  • Communications array
  • Engines
  • Tractor beam
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Fast: Quick for its size, the Fallax's two lare engines give it the power to outrun system patrols.
  • Can't find me: Packed to the brim with sensors, decoys and newr syealth capabilities. The Fallax freighter is one that can be difficult to spot at first glance.
WEAKNESSES
  • Not a fighter: Despite having a decent amount of firepower, the Fallax isn't designed for combat. This mainly due to the ships cargo being held on the outside of the vessel, making it an easy target.
DESCRIPTION

The Fallax is a smugglers vessel, plain and simple. Born out of the necessity of moving less then legal cargo through systems while staying unnoticed. Cargo containers are attached to the stern of the vessel, which allows for pickups and dropoffs in space with the use of a tractor beam. Two powerful engines attached to the sides provided enough power to outrun just about any large patrol craft. Advanced sensors and decoy devices keep this ship under the radar and away from prying eyes. Fallax freighters normally keep a low crew count, typically a max of four. Unlike most smuggler vessels, the Fallax is used mostly for moving spice, mainly in areas that it is legal to a degree.
 
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T E R R A R I S - C O M M A N D
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Simple and solid, but I have to ask you to delete the Loki-ewar system from your sub. John gave the permission to a specific character, to Elle Ordo, and it is not that account/character. So if you want to use the sub, please ask a new permission from him.
 
T E R R A R I S - C O M M A N D
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It is weird, I copied your earlier version and you can find here in the spoiler tag, I hope it helps:

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[FONT=Arial][B][COLOR=rgb(147, 101, 184)]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/COLOR][/B][/FONT]
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[*][FONT=Arial][B][FONT=Arial]Intent[/FONT][/B][FONT=Arial]: Create a smugglers vessel used mainly for spice[/FONT][/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Image Source[/B]: [URL='https://www.instagram.com/p/CdCv_3kK5PF/?igshid=MDJmNzVkMjY%3D&epik=dj0yJnU9ZVFaa1lOZU5adTVKWkp4WkpaYlFmN0V2SXVhSUwtNVgmcD0wJm49R3B3eU9PS0psQjZTODhjbkd6YUFqQSZ0PUFBQUFBR1Bod0tr']X[/URL][/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Canon Link[/B]: [URL='https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Sensor_decoy']Sensor decoy[/URL], [URL='https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Shroud_(device)']Shroud device[/URL], [URL='https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Nightshadow_anti-sensor_treatment']Nightshade anti-sensor treatment[/URL][/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Permissions[/B]: [URL='https://i.gyazo.com/9d3fbc51e6765599bd48fdbc5a02ccf0.png']Permission from John Locke[/URL][/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Primary Source[/B]: N/A[/FONT]
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[FONT=Arial][B][COLOR=rgb(147, 101, 184)]PRODUCTION INFORMATION[/COLOR][/B][/FONT]
[LIST]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Manufacturer[/B]: [URL='https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/conglomerate-of-owls.148459/']Conglomerate of Owls[/URL][/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Affiliation[/B]: [URL='https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/arsenae.133056/']Arsenae[/URL][/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Market Status[/B]: [COLOR=rgb(0, 255, 153)]Open-Market[/COLOR][/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Model[/B]: Fallax class freighter [/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Production[/B]: [COLOR=rgb(72, 214, 204)]Mass-Produced[/COLOR][/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Material[/B]: Reinforced [URL='https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Durasteel']durasteel[/URL] hull, [URL='https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Transparisteel/Legends']transparisteel[/URL] view ports, [URL='https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Alusteel']alusteel[/URL] skeleton, [URL='https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Duraplast/Legends']duraplast[/URL] and [URL='https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Plasteel']plasteel[/URL] interior, Phrik armor plating, various electronic components.[/FONT]
[/LIST]
[FONT=Arial][B][COLOR=rgb(147, 101, 184)]TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS[/COLOR][/B][/FONT]
[LIST]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Classification[/B]: Freighter [/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Length[/B]: Main cabin; 35 meters. Engines; 50 meters [/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Width[/B]: 45 meters [/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Height[/B]: 10 meters [/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Armament[/B]: [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR][/FONT]
[LIST]
[*][FONT=Arial] Two heavy laser cannons[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Two quad bolt cannons[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Four concussion missle racks [/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]One blaster cannon[/FONT]
[/LIST]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Defenses[/B]: [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR][/FONT]
[LIST]
[*][FONT=Arial][COLOR=null]Shielding[/COLOR][/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][COLOR=null]Ion shielding[/COLOR][/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][COLOR=null]Ray shielding[/COLOR][/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][COLOR=null][URL='https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/loki-ewar-system.105319/']Loki-ewar system[/URL][/COLOR][/FONT]
[/LIST]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Squadron Count[/B]: [COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]None[/COLOR]: 1[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Maneuverability Rating[/B]: [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR][/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Speed Rating[/B]: [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR][/FONT]
[*][B]Hyperdrive:[/B] [COLOR=rgb(247, 218, 100)]Average: [/COLOR]1
[/LIST]
[FONT=Arial][B][COLOR=rgb(147, 101, 184)]STANDARD FEATURES[/COLOR][/B][/FONT]
[LIST]
[*][FONT=Arial]Hyperdrive[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Life support[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Crew quarters[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Medical bay[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Escape pods 2x[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Holonet transceiver[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Electronics[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Amenities (bathrooms, cafeteria, etc.)[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Engine bay[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Water reservoir and filtration system[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Shield generators[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Sensor array[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Communications array[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Engines[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial]Tractor beam[/FONT]
[/LIST]
[FONT=Arial][B][COLOR=rgb(147, 101, 184)]ADVANCED SYSTEMS[/COLOR][/B][/FONT]
[LIST]
[*][URL='https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/loki-ewar-system.105319/']Loki-ewar system[/URL]
[*][URL='https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Sensor_decoy']Sensor decoy[/URL]
[*][URL='https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Shroud_(device)']Shroud device[/URL]
[*][URL='https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Nightshadow_anti-sensor_treatment']Nightshade anti-sensor treatment[/URL]
[/LIST]
[FONT=Arial][B][COLOR=rgb(97, 189, 109)]STRENGTHS[/COLOR][/B][/FONT]
[LIST]
[*][FONT=Arial] [COLOR=rgb(97, 189, 109)]Fast: Quick for its size, the Fallax's two lare engines give it the power to outrun system patrols.[/COLOR][/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][COLOR=rgb(97, 189, 109)]Can't find me: Packed to the brim with sensors, decoys and newr syealth capabilities. The Fallax freighter is one that can be difficult to spot at first glance. [/COLOR][/FONT]
[/LIST]
[FONT=Arial][B][COLOR=rgb(209, 72, 65)]WEAKNESSES[/COLOR][/B][/FONT]
[LIST]
[*][FONT=Arial][COLOR=rgb(209, 72, 65)]Not a fighter: Despite having a decent amount of firepower, the Fallax isn't designed for combat. This mainly due to the ships cargo being held on the outside of the vessel, making it an easy target.[/COLOR][/FONT]
[/LIST]
[FONT=Arial][FONT=Arial][B][COLOR=rgb(147, 101, 184)]DESCRIPTION[/COLOR][/B][/FONT][/FONT]

The Fallax is a smugglers vessel, plain and simple. Born out of the necessity of moving less then legal cargo through systems while staying unnoticed. Cargo containers are attached to the stern of the vessel, which allows for pickups and dropoffs in space with the use of a tractor beam. Two powerful engines attached to the sides provided enough power to outrun just about any large patrol craft. Advanced sensors and decoy devices keep this ship under the radar and away from prying eyes. Fallax freighters normally keep a low crew count, typically a max of four. Unlike most smuggler vessels, the Fallax is used mostly for moving spice, mainly in areas that it is legal to a degree.
 
MANIAC MANIAC Woo! Thank you! My phone updated right after I posted the sub, so I think the update had some issues to work out. Also, I found the permissions link I was looking for. Accidentally copied the wrong one.
 
T E R R A R I S - C O M M A N D
Factory Judge
Engineering core Engineering core

I see the new one. Thank you! Would you be so nice to post the permission in that way, where it is visible you are the user he mentioned? So your question above his answer. I mean, it is a very common permission, and anyone could copy it to themselves and say, oh he told me this. There is no proof he said you, I'm sure he did, but rules are rules.
 
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