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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Passenger Capacity | 36
  • Standard Communications Suite
  • Standard Sensory Systems
  • Standard Communications Array
  • Standard Shield Generator
  • Twin Sublight Engines
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Repulsorlift Engines
  • Standard Sensor Array
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Heavily Protected | Equipped with a Serious Amount of Shielding as well as various countermeasures and strong armor (Including Laser-reflective Armor) , the FD-874/3.0 Troop Transport is capable of withstanding attacks from hostile attacks for an extended period of time allowing for the safe deployment of Final Dawn Forces
  • Considerable Troop Capacity | The FD-874/3.0 has a considerable Troop Capacity being able to transport 36 Soldiers at a time.
  • Advanced Power Management System | The FD-874/3.0 is equipped with an Advanced Power Management System which allows it to Shunt its power to certain parts of the Transport such as it's Weapons , Engines or Shields.
WEAKNESSES
  • Low Armament | The FD-874/3.0 is only Equipped with a Pair of Laser Cannons and a Missile Launcher making it unsuitable for Dogfights against enemy Fighters
  • No Hyperdrive | The FD-874/3.0 also lacks a Hyperdrive thus always requiring a Larger Vessel with Hangars capable of holding them in order to get from Planet to Planet.
  • Advanced Power Management System | When Power is shunted to a certain system within the Transport through it's Advanced Power Management System , the other two systems will be weakened which could be detrimental in some cases.
DESCRIPTION

As part of the development of the Hand of Judgement , Marlon Sularen began works on a new Troop Transport for the Final Dawn capable of rapidly deploying troops on the surfaces of hostile planets for quick hit-and-run attacks which the Grand Overseer of the Final Dawn intended to utilize as part of his plans to wage a Private War on those who had wronged him in the Past. The Result was the FD-874/3.0 Troop Transport. Capable of Carrying 36 Soldiers at a time and equipped with Heavy Defensive Systems and Advanced Power Management Systems , the FD-874/3.0 is able to carry out Rapid Deployment Operations at ease with Final Dawn Troopers being deployed onto Planetary Surfaces within just a few minutes making it an effective troop transport which will be very useful in the Grand Overseer's War of Purification.


 
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Once again, a very well done submission. I do have a few comments though.

Technical Specifications: Cool idea to have separate ratings for ‘power shunting,’ however there are a few balance issues that will need to be addressed:
  • ”Normal” power rating is good. No comments here.
  • ”If power is shunted to weapons” is technically underpowered by 1.
  • The above is also true for if power is shunted to engines.
    • I think there is a typo under your speed rating. At the bottom, you say that the rating is average if power is shunted to both shields and engines. I think you meant weapons instead of engines :)
  • The above is also true for shunting to shields. It is underpowered by 1.
Strengths: Laser Reflective Armor should be listed as a strength, or at least specifically named within the ‘heavily protected’ strength.

Please tag me when these items have been addressed.
 


benjamin-last-mandalorian-dropship-blast.jpg


OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Passenger Capacity | 36
  • Standard Communications Suite
  • Standard Sensory Systems
  • Standard Communications Array
  • Standard Shield Generator
  • Twin Sublight Engines
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Repulsorlift Engines
  • Standard Sensor Array
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Heavily Protected | Equipped with a Serious Amount of Shielding as well as various countermeasures , the FD-874/3.0 Troop Transport is capable of withstanding attacks from hostile attacks for an extended period of time allowing for the safe deployment of Final Dawn Forces
  • Considerable Troop Capacity | The FD-874/3.0 has a considerable Troop Capacity being able to transport 36 Soldiers at a time.
  • Advanced Power Management System | The FD-874/3.0 is equipped with an Advanced Power Management System which allows it to Shunt its power to certain parts of the Transport such as it's Weapons , Engines or Shields.
WEAKNESSES
  • Low Armament | The FD-874/3.0 is only Equipped with a Pair of Laser Cannons and a Missile Launcher making it unsuitable for Dogfights against enemy Fighters
  • No Hyperdrive | The FD-874/3.0 also lacks a Hyperdrive thus always requiring a Larger Vessel with Hangars capable of holding them in order to get from Planet to Planet.
  • Advanced Power Management System | When Power is shunted to a certain system within the Transport through it's Advanced Power Management System , the other two systems will be weakened which could be detrimental in some cases.
DESCRIPTION

As part of the development of the Hand of Judgement , Marlon Sularen began works on a new Troop Transport for the Final Dawn capable of rapidly deploying troops on the surfaces of hostile planets for quick hit-and-run attacks which the Grand Overseer of the Final Dawn intended to utilize as part of his plans to wage a Private War on those who had wronged him in the Past. The Result was the FD-874/3.0 Troop Transport. Capable of Carrying 36 Soldiers at a time and equipped with Heavy Defensive Systems and Advanced Power Management Systems , the FD-874/3.0 is able to carry out Rapid Deployment Operations at ease with Final Dawn Troopers being deployed onto Planetary Surfaces within just a few minutes making it an effective troop transport which will be very useful in the Grand Overseer's War of Purification.



Hey! It's been a little over the week. What's your status on this? Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen
 
Just made the edits.

Everything looks good for the most part, although I think with just the nature of adding a third variable for the energy shunting, it's still one point under powered when shunting to Engines.

BUT, for simplicity-sake, I will consider it a non issue.

APPROVED!

I have flagged this as "pending approval" so my trainer can follow up. Thank you!
 
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