Feed back for the Hot-Stepper! [ Micah Talith ]

[Micah Talith]

Hey guys!

I think I've done quite a bit with Micah, and tossed him in as many public threads as possible. A few of you have fought with him, others bantered.

I wanted to get some feedback on the good, the bad, and in terms of writing, what would make Micah better?

 

[Darth Carnifex]

Talith.

Blech.

 

[Voices of The Deep]

He's a sexy beast.

Nuff said.

 

[Darth Assimilus]

I like Micah... better than that [member="Darth Vornskr"] everyone talks about

=P

 

[Micah Talith]

Thanks but give me actual feedback!!

*Shakes them all*

 

[Liliane]

I'mma give you feedback.

I honestly don't know how you maintain so many characters and make at least most of them so well developed. I can see Micah is one of your 'main' kind of characters and you use him a lot more than some others.

He's a fun guy, seems nice and quirky and the threads where I've been with Micah have been very pleasing to read.

I think this character is a perfect example of what an explorer should be -- he travels, he joins plenty of threads, gathers materials, helps others around the galaxy, makes stuff.

I haven't seen him interact with a lot of characters in these public/open threads, so he looks like kind of a lurker/mysterious guy to me.

Very well written character.

 

[Kenrath]

[member="Micah Talith"]

I don't think we have written together since the Ruusan skirmish last summer.


That thread was a lot of fun though. Admittedly I lost track of your stuff being too busy myself trying to right Vengeance's own story. Maybe Micah will run into my Rogue Paddy.

 

[Micah Talith]

[member="Liliane Lancaster"]

Thank you for that feedback, I grew into Micah and he's turned into a very fun character. A sort of Indy Jones meets Ranger type with a healthy dose of rascal charm.

It is interesting to play him, not just due to his experiences and his family, but because perhaps he is the foil to his older sister Aela's serious tendencies and his younger sister's bit of anger issues.

My only bit of disappointment was that I hadn't been able to really flesh out that Micah is a twin. He doesn't feel like a twin, which i really wanted that connection for him. However, [member="Kaili Talith"] managed to really give me that sibling interaction that at the very least, really set them both with a solid connection.

 

[Jamie Pyne]

[member="Micah Talith"]

An avatar with more than half a face would be nice.

 

[Micah Talith]

[member="Jamie Pyne"]

Only if you are gonna do something with it, Poppet.​

 

[Jamie Pyne]

[member="Micah Talith"]

 

[Micah Talith]

[member="Jamie Pyne"]

 

[Tahira Solo]

Hrnnggh

I actually like the half face avatar. Makes him more mysterious.