Feedback - Darth Imperia

[Darth Imperia]

Alright, rip into me.
Impy is my first and favorite character, and I want her to be sustainable and entertaining for a long, long time - so lay into me. Everything good and bad about her you guys can possibly think of.

 

[Darth Carnifex]

Used 2 be cool

 

[Darth Imperia]

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[Darth Carnifex]

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[Progflaw99]

I haven't had the pleasure! (Or the horror )

 

[Ras'kala'han]

[member="Darth Imperia"]

You get the feedback when you thread with me like I have been asking for 10,000 (ten thousand) years

 

[TB-705]

[member="Darth Imperia"]

You get the feedback when you thread with me like I have been asking for 10,000 (ten thousand) years

 

[Connor Harrison]

[member="Darth Imperia"] Seen you around a fair while, and currently I don't know where you stand Faction wise (IC of course) or what her drives are but I think this is all part of establishing herself, so it's not bad - just looking forward to see where she sees herself and where she ends up.

Nice to have a character with little regard for much else bar her own views and those closest to her, adding that spice of unpredictability and danger to the point she answers to nobody but herself which is nice to see.

And via Aria and my following of her story, I'm intrigued as to what her intentions are and where it leads. Hope to get to write with her one day for Dark Side deviance and development.

Good stuff.

 

[NightSister]

Used 2 be cool

is still 2cool4u

I have nothing but good things to say about Impy. Her personality is really clear but still complex, and you write it brilliantly and consistently. I love that she's unabashedly a villain while still having her human moments (#AveMaria intensifies) and that you've mixed a few villain tropes with a lot of unique traits. Your writing is also superb and really enjoyable to read, and yours are among the threads that I automatically click on when I see who's writing. It also helps that you're generally a pretty cool person.

As for cons:
Needs more #Maria threads

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Forreal tho, I just want to see more of her. What we've seen thus far is brilliant, but that just makes me want to see more! I'd like to see her in a thread where she's the subjugatee rather than the subjugator, for example, or struggles with who she is/what she's become. Any interesting story arc will keep me happy, though

Also. The avatar and signature have mismatched hair colours and it bugs me.

 

[Hadleigh Purkis]

Not enough staying the course.

7/10 - IGN