Feedback Edition: I am Burr?

[Viviana]

Calder's been around for a while, though normally he's just been another of my alt accounts that I forget about or can't write out in the way I want to. Thankfully, the big fluffy has taken most of my attention and I've been having fun writing out both his inner turmoil and old wisdom (Well, hopefully wisdom). And I like feedback cause a) I don't always see something I might be doing wrong and fresh eyes never hurt and b) I'm shallow and the opinion of others makes me feel better about myself and my writing.

What do you think of the Burr? Too much? Not enough? And what about the profile? His history make sense and engage you the reader? To those who let me know, thanks. I appreciate you taking the time.

 

[Darth Carnifex]

u am burr

 

[Darren Torran]

I like polar bears, big ice hammers and incorrect grammar when talking about oneself. You're perfect as you are.

 

[NightSister]

jede burr best burr

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He's a good character, I like him. Love the concept, neat backstory. I'm going to say what I always say, which is be mean to challenge your characters. Throw him into weird and wacky situations, exploit character flaws. You've got a really cool character - now do a load of dev and he'll just keep getting better.

 

[WolfMortum]

Haha these responses xD

[member="Calder Icehammer"]

My experience is limited as our characters don't have a long standing history but I have to agree with the above statement "Best Burr". I really dig the character concept for its originality, something that hasn't been done on Chaos is generally a plus for me and having the privilege of helping Burr to become Jedi Burr is awesome.

I'm looking forward to seeing that Icehammer in action, you know I dig a good fight. As our threads move on I'm sure I'll have more to add but for now, there's not a lot to complain about dude, it's all been pretty dope

 

[Aarshlût Muyel]

[member="Calder Icehammer"] From what I've seen of Burr which isn't much I like the character. The way you write him is realistic and he is stubborn on some points. Keep it up man!