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Feedback for All 6 of my characters

Hello all,

I would like for all of you to comment on my writing for all of my characters, give feedback and critique for my writing and also about what I could do to improve the character. I've been here for about a month or so now and would like some feedback on the work I've done. Please give any critique you would think can help me on my posts.

[member="John Shepherd"] | [member="Marcus Wolf"] | [member="Fenn Ordo"] | [member="Rukya Rexus"] | [member="Matt Justice "]|
 

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