Ben Carlin
Rogue One
Hello all,
I would like for all of you to comment on my writing for all of my characters, give feedback and critique for my writing and also about what I could do to improve the character. I've been here for about a month or so now and would like some feedback on the work I've done. Please give any critique you would think can help me on my posts.
[member="John Shepherd"] | [member="Marcus Wolf"] | [member="Fenn Ordo"] | [member="Rukya Rexus"] | [member="Matt Justice "]|
I would like for all of you to comment on my writing for all of my characters, give feedback and critique for my writing and also about what I could do to improve the character. I've been here for about a month or so now and would like some feedback on the work I've done. Please give any critique you would think can help me on my posts.
[member="John Shepherd"] | [member="Marcus Wolf"] | [member="Fenn Ordo"] | [member="Rukya Rexus"] | [member="Matt Justice "]|