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Feedback on Abraxas the False Butcher. (Genetic duplicate of Darth Carnifex)

So I haven't updated Abraxas in a while even though I've had the intention on updating his bio, but alas, life has me drained and has me procrastinating with writing to an extent. So even though I make these occasionally, I totally get that most people may not know who this guy is yet. Long story short, he started out as a lab experiment for a Mando scientist to be a personal guardian, but ended up developing much more of a conscious. During the time of his training, he began to show heightened aggression and affluence within the dark side of the Force due to his genetic donor being that of [member="Darth Carnifex"], formerly known as Darth Vornskr.

As time went on, the experiment's mind began to become corrupt with the power that was growing within. He pursued interests of Imperials and even obtained the rank of being an Officer within the military.

Skip ahead in time and eventually he found himself becoming evermore subservient to the clutch the Force was having on his mind, literally driving him mad and becoming enthralled with the Sith, which is where he truly made a name for himself, shedding the former role as a militant super-soldier and becoming a butcher and bringer of dark tidings.

After all this, his body was badly damaged and held together by cybernetics and pure dark side energies. He went on to dwell on Ambria after being defeated and fed on anyone that dared to venture on the realm's surface. Eventually a moment came where he would go on to possess Silas Verd, a member of the Verd clan and having direction relation to that of [member="Isley Verd"].

He now roams the stars once more in his new form, and after some time, reestablished himself amongst his Zambrano clansmen and under the rule of the God-King himself, spilling blood once more. The dark side is steadily building within him and even heavily corrupting his vessel, causing his hunger to become that much more insatiable and uncontrollable.

I suppose this explanation was longer than needed, but this is a brief summary of how his life has been thus far as well as his past. Any thoughts? Criticisms on what I need to work on/change? Let me know!
 
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