Feedback on Abraxas

[Darth Eversor]

So I've been writing Abraxas for quite a while, even on and off sometimes due to IRL reasons. Because of this, ideas and direction changed the format for the character quite a bit. I'm concerned it may have made things convoluted or very off-beat from what the original concept was.

But, I digress. Bring on the good, the bad, and everything in-between. Gimmie your opinions.

 

[Darth Ayra]

He is a shiny character, that has a good biography, but has no real substance to him.

 

[Judas of Vahl]

[member="Abraxas"]

2/10, not enough death and evil - IGN

jk

Seriously, your characters lack direction and I digress, because lots of mine do too. Instill a purpose into him and stick with it. Treachery and betrayal is extremely fun, as you can surely tell, but make sure you're making your character commit to something meaningful to him/her. That's where your muse comes into play as well. When you feel like something fits, you enjoy it, then the whole experience is nothing short of fun and fulfilling.

 

[Ras'kala'han]

[member="Abraxas"]

In the few threads we interacted, I've had fun. You have a very good sense of who your character is, what they're like, but the major problem is you also feel as to not have a sense of what to do with them. I feel like once you find a path to follow, you'll excel at it.