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So, hands down my favorite character to ever write. Adron has finally stepped into his own. I'd like to say I've hammered in his personality, demeanor, and mindset.
So I'd like a bit of feedback on the character, my writing skills, and any other (applicable) critiques you may offer.
To begin there is a bit of self- critiquing I'd like to do. The bulk of it being in Adron's rapidly advancing and sporatic story. I made the mistake of attaching him to a faction from the beginning. As such he was kind of forced to flow with that factions motions. However, I still think he had some great progression from boy-lord to self-exiled Count of Serenno.
I did personally enjoy his dark side progression. His story was molded for a fall to the DS and it went well IMO. The death of his family, betrayal of his fellow Counts, harming of his love interest, and biggest of all the fall of Serenno to the Site. All of these we're big impacts to his leaning in the force. And while he is not particularly evil he has a stone set mindset of doing whatever he has to so he can protect his house and accomplish his goals.
So let's hear what you can offer me, please and thank you !
So I'd like a bit of feedback on the character, my writing skills, and any other (applicable) critiques you may offer.
To begin there is a bit of self- critiquing I'd like to do. The bulk of it being in Adron's rapidly advancing and sporatic story. I made the mistake of attaching him to a faction from the beginning. As such he was kind of forced to flow with that factions motions. However, I still think he had some great progression from boy-lord to self-exiled Count of Serenno.
I did personally enjoy his dark side progression. His story was molded for a fall to the DS and it went well IMO. The death of his family, betrayal of his fellow Counts, harming of his love interest, and biggest of all the fall of Serenno to the Site. All of these we're big impacts to his leaning in the force. And while he is not particularly evil he has a stone set mindset of doing whatever he has to so he can protect his house and accomplish his goals.
So let's hear what you can offer me, please and thank you !