Alize Rosenheim
#Lit
Hi!
Having roleplayed Alize for a bit I'm curious as to what people think of her as a character and my writing of her. What can I do to improve her as a character or my writing so that it is a more enjoyable read? Constructive criticism welcome! Thank you in advance to anyone who replies!
Having roleplayed Alize for a bit I'm curious as to what people think of her as a character and my writing of her. What can I do to improve her as a character or my writing so that it is a more enjoyable read? Constructive criticism welcome! Thank you in advance to anyone who replies!