Feedback on Celiana

[Celiana]

So I'm curious as to what any of you guys or gals have seen in Celiana that you love, hate, or would offer advice on...Wanna write a great character and constructive critique is key! For those of you I've RP'ed with I'm especially keen to hear what you peeps have to say...

Thanks Loves! <(^.^)>

 

[Rasu Gan]

Lovin' the way you write combat sections. They're always a fun read

[My two cents]

 

[Celiana]

Haha thanks long time doing martial art IRL helps with that

 

[NightSister]

I agree with [member="Rasu Gan"], your combat writing is excellent. Also love the detail you put in posts, and Celiana's story is pretty enjoyable to read. She's also just a great character in general.

Only thing I will say is, you have a tendency to call people out IC on every emotion or thought that goes through their head in a post, even when it's not made clear that said thought or emotion is obvious enough that Celiana would notice it. Doing so sort of disrupts the flow of a thread and can feel invasive. But other than that, keep it up.

[member="Celiana"]