Herr Vanderhing
Viceroyalty
Rate my character. What do you guys think?....
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I like it, it's nice to see a character who shies away from combat and focuses on other aspects such as business and politics. He does seem a tad bit cliché as a manipulative senator-type character, so I think it might be interesting to add some more traits that definitively set him apart from the trope. Maybe be legitimately compassionate about a specific positive thing, having a weak spot for something, or having such a strong conviction about a specific ideal that he'd be willing to die for it despite his usual cowardly nature. Those are just some suggestions though and of course you're free to do as you wish with the character.
Aside from that, I think the character is good. Maybe we could RP sometime, if our characters ever had the chance to cross paths.
I like it, it's nice to see a character who shies away from combat and focuses on other aspects such as business and politics. He does seem a tad bit cliché as a manipulative senator-type character, so I think it might be interesting to add some more traits that definitively set him apart from the trope. Maybe be legitimately compassionate about a specific positive thing, having a weak spot for something, or having such a strong conviction about a specific ideal that he'd be willing to die for it despite his usual cowardly nature. Those are just some suggestions though and of course you're free to do as you wish with the character.
Aside from that, I think the character is good. Maybe we could RP sometime, if our characters ever had the chance to cross paths.
Herr Vanderhing
Viceroyalty
Believe it or not I had a compassionate positive thing that was his weak spot, I was going to save it for a bit but why not, Herr Vanderhing never had his mother and sister killed, he ended up loving them and he keeps them alive but locked away...
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[member="Vex Pendel"]
I believe [member="Herr Vanderhing"] is like a sick twisted version of Nute Gunray. He is more or less mad dicator material. Quite unquie in a way to be fair.