Hope is Kindled
I haven't ever done one of these before, but I figured now would be a good time as any. Is there anything I can improve when it comes to Kahne.
I appreciate the input!
I appreciate the input!
Star Wars Roleplay: Chaos
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Feedback on Kahne
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Hope is the elixir of life. (semi-retired)
Well, I will try to not to be too biased here, but...
I am really excited for you the writer and your character [member="Kahne Porte"]. With your RL schedule finally allowing some time to post more regularly, now you will be able delve deeper into who he is, perhaps tie his darker background in a bit more to present day, and tap his potential to become a great Jedi Master here amongst others at Chaos.
I think it would be fun for him to have a rival either of the Sith nature or Ren as the Alliance-in-Exile and the Shattered Order push back against those two dark side factions post GA's Endgame. Oh and maybe take on a padawan(s) as there are too few teachers nowadays in these difficult times for the Jedi.
Other than those suggestions, I think my only concrit I have had is the need of more consistent posting, which you have been working on as of late to great benefit. Looking forward to what the future brings for the Master Jedi and those around him.
I am really excited for you the writer and your character [member="Kahne Porte"]. With your RL schedule finally allowing some time to post more regularly, now you will be able delve deeper into who he is, perhaps tie his darker background in a bit more to present day, and tap his potential to become a great Jedi Master here amongst others at Chaos.
I think it would be fun for him to have a rival either of the Sith nature or Ren as the Alliance-in-Exile and the Shattered Order push back against those two dark side factions post GA's Endgame. Oh and maybe take on a padawan(s) as there are too few teachers nowadays in these difficult times for the Jedi.
Other than those suggestions, I think my only concrit I have had is the need of more consistent posting, which you have been working on as of late to great benefit. Looking forward to what the future brings for the Master Jedi and those around him.
Moonage Daydream
I like the character! Seeing you hop into the threads and messaging to how you can help with upcoming stories is the best. I'm looking forward to writing with you more in the coming weeks!