Feedback on Krest and Icehammer.

[Darth Ferus]

I have an unnatural love for feedback. Comes from when I first started rping. Its always helped me improve on things, such as maling a character to fit a setting instead of forcing the setting to adapt to the character. So every now and then I make a new thread searching for something to improve that I cant see myself.

Krest is my main, but not my only character. Calder Icehammer is a new one of mine. First attempt at a Jedi, and just like Krest I'm looking for anything people think I can improve upon. So be it their personality, how I write their combat or social interactions to how I write itself lemmi know. Tips to improve or things you may have noticed.

 

[Nefertari Sovint]

I don't really know Krest, but I wouldn't mind threading with him provided I could make it work with either of my characters.

As for Calder, the little I've seen looks promising. Nef would like to meet him, and the two younglings she's taking care of would be amazed to meet a polar bear jedi.

[member="Krest"]​

 

[Darth Ferus]

OhgodwhathaveIdone.

[member="Nefertari Sovint"] We should thread! I also dont know what I clicked. Sorry.

 

[Tyluko-Kai Kaimana]

I too have not managed to take a good look at Krest, but I am truly fascinated by Calder from what I have seen of him in the Midvinter skirmish. The fact that he grew up on the isolated planet of Midvinter and his Beorni Culture really add to his story. Also the fact that he came from a group of people that chose not to fight and eventually he had to learn to fight and found that he was rather good at it. His use of an Icehammer as his main weapon despite being a Jedi is also very interesting and unique. He is a character that I think would get along rather well with Tyluko, as I feel the Beorni and the Dolphinarians have a lot in common. Would love to roleplay with him at some point, I am hoping they will be able to meet up somehow during the skirmish. Though that might be complicated haha.

[member='Krest'] [member='Calder Icehammer']

 

[Vora Kaar]

[member="Krest"], Oh to see you still playing Krest every so often is good. Enjoyed the various Roleplays we have had together as multiple of my own characters. Xander. Nick, Darren. All have had some kind of interaction with Krest. Your dedication to your character over the years has seemed to dwarf my own at times. Keep going with the work. And as always, if you need a hand with anything, let me know.

 

[Tydeus of Tion]

I really enjoy the bear. You do a good job of humanizing him. Would like to see more of the bear.

 

[Ras'kala'han]

[member="Krest"]

As Sith go, he's very... different. At times he seems totally principled and elegant, but at other times he's very ruthless. He has a laid-back demeanor, a sort of air of casual friendliness about him, but demands respect through sheer power. Moreover, the demeanor doesn't seem to be 100% true or false. His true objectives aren't as vulgar as most Sith, and he pursues them with similar secrecy.

All in all, he's one of the more puzzling Sith I've encountered, and I enjoy RPing with him.

 

[Darth Ferus]

I bump.

 

[Edward Vyperion]

*shrugs* Never seen your jedi character, but Krest seems intriguing to say the least.