Feedback on Lady Sovereign

[Voices of The Deep]

"The truth will set me free..."​

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Alright so, i've been here for a reasonable amount of time. Done quite a bit with my girl here. Interacted with a lot of the community. So i figured i'd throw one of these things up. What do you guys think of Winter? Writing style, story arc, character basis, ect. I can take constructive criticism...so long as it is not blatantly rude. Cause lets be honest i've been nice to everyone on this site so i think i deserve to be treated with the same respect i treat all you.

Cheers mates. ^^

 

[Pvt. Viper]

"If I weren't straight..."

 

[Voices of The Deep]

"If I weren't straight..."

Then don't be?

 

[Gray Raxis]

[member="Pvt. Viper"] [member="Lady Sovereign"]

Well she is too busy trying to seduce me at the moment. I think you are next on her list when she is done with me.

 

[Pvt. Viper]

Nope. List goes as follows:

[member="Gray Raxis"]
[member="Sibar Laval"]
[member="Lady Sovereign"]

EDIT:

[member="Katelyn Thanewulf"]

 

[Gray Raxis]

[member="Pvt. Viper"]

Well you got your work cut out for you. I get this feeling several people are out to seduce Gray right now.... >.>

 

[Voices of The Deep]

[member="Pvt. Viper"]

Well you got your work cut out for you. I get this feeling several people are out to seduce Gray right now.... >.>

Don't flatter yourself lol

 

[Gray Raxis]

[member="Lady Sovereign"]

You would be surprised.

 

[Katelyn Feanor]

[member="Pvt. Viper"]
I was called?!

 

[Pvt. Viper]

[member="Katelyn Thanewulf"]

*Pounce* yes

 

[Katelyn Feanor]

[member="Lady Sovereign"]
"Luckily I'm Bi so I can get Both!"

[member="Pvt. Viper"]
*Stunned Face*

 

[Voices of The Deep]

This thread has taken a drastic turn... lol

 

[Pvt. Viper]

It has, hasn't it?

 

[Henry Chinko]

[member="Lady Sovereign"]

For Hank, I'll say that I've very much enjoyed the creativity and sheer aspirational energy that you've put into the character. 300 posts, the makings of an actually successful and original Faction with what seems to be actually developed plans and storylines, and a small band of loyal-ass followers (diverse, too) in such a short period of time is truly a badge of awesomeness of which you should be proud.

Also qq that I'm not being seduced. Whatever, it's fine.

 

[Dune Rhur]

Love You or Hate You, everyone needs A Little Bit of Shh. This is a Public Warning.

 

[Ryn'Dhal]

[member="Lady Sovereign"]

Haven't threaded with you yet, but with how explosively and forcefully you're suddenly bursting onto the scene, I'd hazard to compare you to my good buddy [member=James Justice] for the next up-and-commer. You'll be the next 'big' 'Minor' faction I'm sure!

 

[Louise]

Your rapping could be refined.