Lord Ajihad
I use Aristois
Alright folks, give to me. What do you like about him? What do you dislike? What should I change? No hold barred unless it's unjustified.
Also, feel free to give feedback to me as a writer.
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StoneGlory
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Your posts are detailed and clear.
I also love the idea of a Sith who runs crime operations. The story going with him and Vaak is really fun to write.
Thanks for the gaunts, by the way
I also love the idea of a Sith who runs crime operations. The story going with him and Vaak is really fun to write.
Thanks for the gaunts, by the way
Eternal Father
Besides harboring suicidal tendencies for wanting to square off against [member="Darth Adekos"], I don't have anything negative to say about him 
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Lord Ajihad
I use Aristois
[member="Darth Vornskr"]
Ooh, suicidal tendencies, eh? Maybe he wouldn't be so much of a threat without big daddy Kaine standing behind him
Soon™
Ooh, suicidal tendencies, eh? Maybe he wouldn't be so much of a threat without big daddy Kaine standing behind him
Soon™
Eternal Father
Perhaps.
But [member="Darth Adekos"] was once a Sith Emperor in the same capacity of when Kaine himself was a Sith Emperor.
Just something to absorb
[member="Lord Ajihad"]
But [member="Darth Adekos"] was once a Sith Emperor in the same capacity of when Kaine himself was a Sith Emperor.
Just something to absorb
[member="Lord Ajihad"]
Lord Ajihad
I use Aristois
Key words thereDarth Vornskr said:
Wasn't he the one who got his back broken on his own throne, or was that his dad?But yes! I most certainly look forward to this [member="Darth Adekos"] ! By the end of it, at least one of us will meet our maker...
Of course, things might be just a bit easier if @Darth Carach would just give me his stupid heart. *slams fist into table*
Eternal Father
Naw, he was the unfortunate target of a certain rogue Sith's angst who was a superior master of telekinesis than he was.
#NeverForgetTheThronebreaker
[member="Lord Ajihad"]
#NeverForgetTheThronebreaker
[member="Lord Ajihad"]
Lord Ajihad
I use Aristois
[member="Darth Vornskr"]
Journal Entry #1: How to defeat [member="Darth Adekos"]
Thx bbe <3
Journal Entry #1: How to defeat [member="Darth Adekos"]
- Superior Telekinesis
Thx bbe <3
Eternal Father
By superor telekinesis I meant like Starkiller levels of TK tomfoolery
[member="Lord Ajihad"]
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Lord Ajihad
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[member="Darth Vornskr"]
Oh wow. I was expecting it to be some seriously powerful TK, but not on that level. I was unprepared for it go beyond the realm of shenanigans, much less tomfoolery.
Oh wow. I was expecting it to be some seriously powerful TK, but not on that level. I was unprepared for it go beyond the realm of shenanigans, much less tomfoolery.