Lynn Nantaris
Corerunner
Anyone got any thoughts, advice, concerns or anything really on Lynn?
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Valiens Nantaris
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[member="Lynn Corerunner"]
Eh, she's alright.
Eh, she's alright.
Valiens Nantaris
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[member="Lynn Corerunner"]
But seriously....
I think your writing is very solid. You have a good idea of the character and some notions of where to take her.
She's still a new character, so don't lock yourself in too much with where you want to go as that can all change.
I would advise you to read over your posts before posting to make sure they flow well.
But seriously....
I think your writing is very solid. You have a good idea of the character and some notions of where to take her.
She's still a new character, so don't lock yourself in too much with where you want to go as that can all change.
I would advise you to read over your posts before posting to make sure they flow well.
The Wolf
I get a kick out of reading your threads. I approve. I want to see where the character goes. I just wish the writing had a better...style? I think that's the word I want to use. A better pattern for how the character thinks and feels, and talks. Seems over the place at times. But otherwise, a solid character and I enjoy her a lot.
Lynn Nantaris
Corerunner
[member="Preliat Mantis"]
Mind expanding on the style?
Mind expanding on the style?