Feedback on Orphen

[Orphen]

So.

With Orphen now coming into knighthood and going to be going through some changes and big plot things I thought I would post in here to see what people think on the guy and maybe where people think u should take him.

I'd be more than greatfull on any review be it positive feedback or constructive on him or my writing style. I don't really mind.

Side note: I'd anyone here would like to do a thread after liking what they see feel free to shoot me a pm!

Thanks in advance!

You're fantastic.

 

[Voices of The Deep]

Adam from RWBY



Perfection in all its glory



Nuff said.









But seriously you gotta killer writing style. Go on with your bad self.

 

[Orphen]

[member="Winter Sovereign"]

Thanks friend!

Super appreciated