Enyo Typhos
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Enyo is a character I've had for over a year, though I've only recently gotten the time to write her at length. As the thread title says, she's the clone of Siobhan Kerrigan, though the latter is still unaware of her existence.
Long story cut short, she was created by a group of organic-hating HRDs called Archangel as part of their attempt to harness Force-users and use them as weapons. Specifically to one day confront and fight Siobhan. She's been indoctrinated to serve them, bit like a child soldier, and thinks her template is a monster. Recently, she got a younger 'sister' called [member="Amara Zarides"], who's a clone of Siobhan's dead nemesis Kaelin Isandros, a very evil Sith.
She's a character I've at times have had difficulty writing and establishing a distinct personality for her, so I'd be interested in people's thoughts. Constructive criticism and all that is explicitly encouraged and desired.
Some threads that I think show her development well:
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/58542-the-birth-of-fire-madeline/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/87653-trial-by-fire-maelion/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/89707-in-a-world-where-the-kings-are-employers-first-order-dominion-of-thakwaa/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/90732-what-secrets-do-you-hide/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/91070-mirage-of-metal-maelion/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/94044-by-the-pricking-of-my-thumbs/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/93844-cats-on-fire/
Long story cut short, she was created by a group of organic-hating HRDs called Archangel as part of their attempt to harness Force-users and use them as weapons. Specifically to one day confront and fight Siobhan. She's been indoctrinated to serve them, bit like a child soldier, and thinks her template is a monster. Recently, she got a younger 'sister' called [member="Amara Zarides"], who's a clone of Siobhan's dead nemesis Kaelin Isandros, a very evil Sith.
She's a character I've at times have had difficulty writing and establishing a distinct personality for her, so I'd be interested in people's thoughts. Constructive criticism and all that is explicitly encouraged and desired.
Some threads that I think show her development well:
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/58542-the-birth-of-fire-madeline/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/87653-trial-by-fire-maelion/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/89707-in-a-world-where-the-kings-are-employers-first-order-dominion-of-thakwaa/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/90732-what-secrets-do-you-hide/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/91070-mirage-of-metal-maelion/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/94044-by-the-pricking-of-my-thumbs/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/93844-cats-on-fire/