Taeli Raaf
Bookworm
Haven't done one of these in awhile, but I'm curious about thoughts on this character since she is nearing 4000 posts I figured it would be a good time to get some more feedback
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Feedback on Taeli
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Ryn'Dhal
Silver Shroud
Haven't met you IC yet [member="Taeli Raaf"], but I'm wanting to.
Does that qualify as a positive feedback? :-3
Does that qualify as a positive feedback? :-3
The Lion King
While I haven't read all that much of your work, what I have read is really, really good. You're a great writer, [member="Taeli Raaf"]. 
Also, since I consider [member="Connor Harrison"] my brother that basically makes you family. ^_^
Also, since I consider [member="Connor Harrison"] my brother that basically makes you family. ^_^
[member="Taeli Raaf"] Well I can easily say I've found your journey from Lady Arcanix to Jedi Raaf brilliantly written. You never go "over the top" or "dramatic" with any posts or development, and its always fulled with a really clear knowledge of the topic you're focusing on - be it a Force power, character background or emotional feeling. This makes her very real and someone to invest in following and caring for.
That, I find, makes you a joy to write with and share adventures and development with because it's all so well thought out and always means something, which I find engaging as a writer because everything is important and counts.
I hope to share more of the same adventures and developments in future because I feel Taeli has been there for so long and has really given Connor a rock to fall back on and push him forward, so thank you for the time invested in my character also - I appreciate it.
Keep up the great work and I can't where to see Taeli goes next and what lies in store for her.
Oh, and [member="Thurion Heavenshield"] - we need a good catch up soon. I got you, bro.
That, I find, makes you a joy to write with and share adventures and development with because it's all so well thought out and always means something, which I find engaging as a writer because everything is important and counts.
I hope to share more of the same adventures and developments in future because I feel Taeli has been there for so long and has really given Connor a rock to fall back on and push him forward, so thank you for the time invested in my character also - I appreciate it.
Keep up the great work and I can't where to see Taeli goes next and what lies in store for her.
Oh, and [member="Thurion Heavenshield"] - we need a good catch up soon. I got you, bro.
B E A C O N
lol. 4000 posts...
On a more serious note: I have a personal bias against Sith to Jedi & vice versa, so bear that in mind - I think the character seems more like two completely different personas from Sith to Jedi, whether that was intentional or not doesn't really impact my perspective, it just seems like they were almost two different people wholly in everything but appearance. I get the change from evil.. or whatever to Jedi and all that, and I know the pressure of being close to a Jedi Grandmaster, it just seemed like a stark contrast, just something that might have gone more smoothly in a longer transition.
Still haven't met the the Raaf siblings, beyond Corvus, with any of my characters, or at least I don't have any recollection of meeting Taeli with Silara when she was alive/around, so you know Oh wait, I'm in a thread with you now, aren't I...?
Yeah, ignore me.
On a more serious note: I have a personal bias against Sith to Jedi & vice versa, so bear that in mind - I think the character seems more like two completely different personas from Sith to Jedi, whether that was intentional or not doesn't really impact my perspective, it just seems like they were almost two different people wholly in everything but appearance. I get the change from evil.. or whatever to Jedi and all that, and I know the pressure of being close to a Jedi Grandmaster, it just seemed like a stark contrast, just something that might have gone more smoothly in a longer transition.
Yeah, ignore me.