Seris Caine
Well-Known Member
I'm looking for actual feedback and critiques of Barrien as a character, not me, his writer (I know you all think I suck 
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What do you like about him? What do you hate about him?
Considering I spent roughly 14 years writing Barrien's father as my main character (who is now back as a clone, though not to be my main character), do you think Barrien is an apt enough character to be a main character?
Just thoughts to help me improve him would be great.
).What do you like about him? What do you hate about him?
Considering I spent roughly 14 years writing Barrien's father as my main character (who is now back as a clone, though not to be my main character), do you think Barrien is an apt enough character to be a main character?
Just thoughts to help me improve him would be great.