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Feedback on The Major

Made this account roughly a year ago but didn't really grab on to this site until only July 2017. It really felt like an uphill battle trying to get any lasting storyline until I signed up with the First Order. Since then things are starting to click as a style develops and my formatting gets a little more nuanced.

As arrogant as this may sound, I mainly enjoy RPing because it can become something highly visible in a community. It's my sincere hope to one day craft storylines that entertain any poor soul unlucky enough to be invested in it. With that in mind I'd like to leave this topic here, in the hopes that those with some time can criticize my posts and presence. Perhaps you'd like to think that I won't take kindly to negative feedback, but I actively encourage everyone on the site to leave me as a bloody pile of broken fingers, or advise me to return to whatever dank cave tucked away in whatever accursed forest I happen to hail from.

Heh.
This of course is to improve.
Looking forward to any insight this lovely community can provide.
 
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Well on the one hand any references subtle or not so subtle to Hellsing Ultimate is gold in my book.


On the other side I am not convinced The Major is actually an Agent so much as a Slicer with a permanent employer. I am not saying there is anything wrong with that. Just that I would love to see her take more risks and get into more action.
 

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