Feedback: Scherezade deWinter

[Scherezade deWinter]

I started writing Scherezade about a year and a bit ago. With over 180 threads (the tracker is a few days outdated), most of my post count being IC, and managing to write in threads with a whole bunch of people (though it's never enough), I think I'm ready to receive critique and feedback on the character.

You can find her bio, thread tracker, and more, here.

How can I improve her? What are her weak points? What might be interesting to explore with her?

Stage's yours

Character TLDR; she's gone from being an innocent kid out of the pebble, to loose canon, to being betrayed, to becoming a drunkard, to attempting to undo her existence, to coming back, and is still far from her "who and what am I" arch. But after so many threads, it'd be nice to get some input

 

[Razelle Breuner]

I keep misspelling her name. It sounds too much like "Nessa."

3/10

 

[gdsryrox]

Though I never really get the chance to interact with her character I can say her story and over all character is quite good, not really much I'd consider changing. The way she acts talk and performs her task show a unique sense when compared with others.

 

[Aleidis Zrgaat]

I was a fan of you getting tased, but I mean that in the friendliest way possible. It was hilarious - and writing a serious, dramatic sort of character that you can still squeeze a laugh out of is a real talent. So, well done. If I had to make any recommendations/requests, I'd love to see Scherezade pushed further out of her competency zone. Like, tackling problems that can't be killed with a sword or the Force. But that's just me. Write what you love!

 

[Strider Garon]

I don't know the character well. But I know the writer and you have always been amazing in your ability to bring life to characters through words.

 

[Marina DeVoe]

Well, I'm biased on this as I've known the writer since ... hehe...yea, well before she were turned into a pebble by her grandma here.
I'd say she has always been top notch, as I've never run into her writing at her worst. It's non existence.