Feedback: The Ca.... Man.... Behind the Mask...

[Ryn'Dhal]

So, yeah, I'd like to know some honest opinions about my character, my posting styles, if anyone here is actually reading any of them.

I am my own worst critic, or at least I think so. I'm curious though, do I beat myself up too much, or not enough?

All kidding aside, constructive criticism is GREATLY appreciated!



Some older Threads I've participated in....

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/68959-a-cold-wind-bloweth-silver-sanctum/

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/70642-small-beginnings/

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/67614-the-cloud-pavillion/

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/69437-tygara-tigers-ryn/


And some more recent ones....

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/77211-the-path-to-well-being-ssc-pm-for-invite/

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/96467-to-meet-a-knight/

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/88846-when-in-the-mountains-do-as-the-mountains-do-pm-for-invite-and-deets/

 

[Coci Heavenshield]

[member="Ryn'Dhal"]

A very interesting character and his development is coming along nicely. So I look forward to see more of him in RPs.

You write very well and I enjoy reading your posts. There is a lyrical quality in your words which is nice to read.

 

[Ryn'Dhal]

[member="Coci Heavenshield"]

Your comments made me smile so much. Thank you for your kind words!

 

[James Justice]

I am liking the emotion you put forward, your writing style is pretty good. Honest, I mean both of those things. I would respect you enough to say other wise.

I like your use of detail; its very vivid, and even when your character is trying not to fall into pit of despair, your vocabulary is quite broad which is refreshing.

Also, your character's story of progress, I like. The inner struggle--I like. A LOT of people forfeit the right to have a character undergo termoil--the fact that you are willing to plunge to said depths is a masterpiece.

All in all: fantastic writing, brilliant details, and a consistent character = great writing. I love it, every word is like a brush stroke from Vincent van Gough. keep up the great work.

[member="Ryn'Dhal"]

 

[Ryn'Dhal]

[member="James Justice"]

Holy.... kark.... I.... I legitimately don't know how to reply to that.

I... I think you legitimately made me blush. I appreciate your compliments!

 

[Meeristali Peradun]

[member="Ryn'Dhal"]

I really, really, really appreciate seeing another writer that doesn't see Felacatian and automatically make a neko out of it. You have no idea.

From one non-neko Felacatian to another? #booyah!

 

[James Justice]

[member="Ryn'Dhal"]

Reply by keeping the good posts coming and the good character arcs.

 

[Ryn'Dhal]

So, here are all of my threads up-to-date. Please feel free to pick on me-I mean, give constructive criticism!




http://starwarsrp.net/topic/72034-by-paths-that-seldom-mortal-goes/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/73223-baby-battling-sscjo-padawans-vs-os-acolytes/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/72205-endurance-training/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/72649-footloose-and-fancy-free-trainingopen/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/70819-healing-hands-open-to-all/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/71812-you-cant-take-the-skye-from-me-semi-openask/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/73097-on-the-grind/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/72358-give-them-justice/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/70642-small-beginnings/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/72220-from-rags-to-robes-karrus/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/72418-point-0-campaign-justice-shipping-ltd-only/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/72011-color-out-of-time/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/71808-building-techniques-and-forms-ryndhal/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/71170-its-getting-hot-in-here-galactic-alliance-meet-and-greet/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/71973-ai-mayhem/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/70269-the-morellia-of-the-story-ssc-dominion-of-morellia/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/67614-the-cloud-pavillion/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/70567-two-of-my-own-matsu-ike/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/68959-a-cold-wind-bloweth-silver-sanctum/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/69437-tygara-tigers-ryn/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/67571-exodus-ssc-dominion-of-tygara/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/67386-were-not-in-nar-shaddaa-anymore-open/




Much appreciated!!!

 

[scarletsurf]

I have yet to thread with you myself, however that said I am very amazed by your writing!

It has a certain poetry to it, your words seem to flow perfectly and your vocab is outstanding. I think that it is special to find such a unique style and I believe that I could learn something from it myself to improve my own writing.

Honestly I think your character is amazing as well...

 

[Ryn'Dhal]

I love receiving feedback. Any kind.

The good: Not because it strokes my ego (but lets be real, totally does. Who wouldn't enjoy hearing good things about their writing?), but because it helps me set my personal bar. I receive kudos, that means I need to push myself just a teenie bit harder, get better, produce better product. And then, when I get that next round of praise? My bar nudges up a little higher. Time to push harder again!

The bad: Because it lets me know where I'm weak at. What to shore up. What to adjust to produce better quality.


Believe me, whomever is reading this. I'm genuinely not looking to fluff my ego. I am genuinely looking to find out what I may be doing right, so I can do it better, and what I'm doing wrong, so I can stop doing it wrong!

Thanks for reading, see you in the threads!

 

[Ryn'Dhal]

Alrighty, I don't see the point of making a whole new one of these, but wanted to toss out a link to a thread that is a lead in to a longer-spanning character-development series (going to supply the next link as soon as it gets some meat into it), so please, peruse, and give me some feed-back! I (personally) feel quite pleased with my performance so far, BUT, it's me writing it, so I'm going to be either horribly biased, or excessively critical. Outside input is a must-have!

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/75527-riders-on-the-sand-storm-ssc-dominion-of-tash-taral/

Again, please, and thank you! Love you guys!

 

[Ryker Wylde]

[member="Ryn'Dhal"]

Simply reading your posts and watching you during our time here together has made me a better writer and I hope you continue.



Not to mention the fact that your my Brother from a furry Mother

 

[Ryn'Dhal]

Just gonna bump this, seeing as it's been almost a year since I've had anyone roast, critique, or compliment me. Added three really really recent threads for people to peruse at their leisure and pick at me over.

Thanks in advance!!!!