ᴅᴀʀᴛʜ ᴍᴇᴛᴜs
I completely overhauled my character sheet for Jor'si Denko. This is the first lengthy biography I have done in a long time, so any and all comments and feedback would be greatly appreciated. If there's anything I can do to improve the story, or improve in general, please don't hesitate to share. Many thanks for your time all.  
 
	             
				 
 
		 
					
				
					
						 
					
				
					
						