Fel-Class Star Destroyer

[Malachi Smelone]

[SIZE=9pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]

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  [SIZE=9pt]Intent: To create a new variant of Star Destroyers for the Fel Imperium [/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Image Source: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]https://i.pinimg.com/originals/dc/8c/29/dc8c299213c83d59cdaf81e3d66014b2.png[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Canon Link:N/A[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Primary Source:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Pellaeon-Class Star Destroyer[/SIZE]
  

[SIZE=9pt]PRODUCTION INFORMATION[/SIZE]

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  [SIZE=9pt]Manufacturer: Smelone Industries [/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Affiliation:Fel Imperium[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Model: Fel-Class[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Production[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Mass-Produced[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Material:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Durasteel hull[/SIZE]
  

[SIZE=9pt]TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS[/SIZE]

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  [SIZE=9pt]Classification[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Balanced Star Destroyer[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Length[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 1200m[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Width[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 400m[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Height[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 225m [/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Armament[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Average[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE]
  
  [SIZE=9pt]Heavy Turbolasers x30[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Point Defense Lasers x70[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Proton Torpedos x2 launchers (30 each)[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Turbolaser Batteries x20 [/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Ion Cannons x15[/SIZE]
  

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[SIZE=9pt]Defenses[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Moderate [/SIZE]

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  [SIZE=9pt]Ion Shields[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Deflector Shields [/SIZE]
  

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[SIZE=9pt]Hangar Space[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Moderate ([/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]8[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Squadrons)[/SIZE]

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[SIZE=9pt]Hangar Allocations:[/SIZE]

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  [SIZE=9pt]Starfighters: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]6 squadrons[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Support Craft: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]2 squadrons[/SIZE]
  

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[SIZE=9pt]Maneuverability Rating[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Moderate [/SIZE]

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[SIZE=9pt]Speed Rating[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Average[/SIZE]

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[SIZE=9pt]Hyperdrive Class[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 1 [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Average [/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]STANDARD FEATURES[/SIZE]

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  [SIZE=9pt]Heavy Turbolasers [/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Point Defense Lasers[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Proton Torpedos [/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Ion Shields[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Deflector Shields [/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Turbolaser Batteries[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Ion Cannon [/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Phylon Q7 tractor beam projector[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]TIE Engines [/SIZE]
  

[SIZE=9pt]ADVANCED SYSTEMS[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]N/A[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Strengths[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]:[/SIZE]

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  [SIZE=9pt]More Firepower[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Maneuverable [/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]EMP resistant [/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Strong Armor [/SIZE]
  

[SIZE=9pt]Weaknesses[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]:[/SIZE]

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  [SIZE=9pt]If the Ship is over used then the Engines will overheat [/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Vulnerable Engines can be disabled quickly [/SIZE]
  

[SIZE=9pt]Description[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Part of a Proposed “Fel Revival Program” the Fel-Class Star Destroyer is to serve as the First of many new ships that Smelone Incorporation plans to deliver to the Fel Empire in order to replace their older ships and give the Fel Empire a state of the art Navy in order to facilitate it’s reconquest of it’s former territory. Despite the fact that it has major disadvantages in ship-to-ship combat , the Fel-Class Star Destroyer does possess great capabilities as a Support ship and Escort Ship for the Pellaeon II-Class Star Destroyers but nevertheless it serves as a great replacement for the old ships of the Fel Empire. [/SIZE]

 

[Luca Donskoi]

under review

 

[Luca Donskoi]

Hey, [member="Malachi Smelone"]. I'm going to be working with you through the review and approval process. If at any point something I say or suggest does not make sense to you or you need further clarification, please do not hesitate to ask.

Just a couple of things I'd like you to take a look at though.

Image Source: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/dc/8c/29/dc8c299213c83d59cdaf81e3d66014b2.png

If you could please provide a link that gives credit to where the image was taken from and not directly to the image itself, that would be greatly appreciated. If this image is your own creation, you can simply state that as well

Affiliation:Fel Imperium

If you could do me a solid here and link the Fel Imperium that would be greatly appreciated.

Material: Durasteel hull

Please remember to link all specifically named materials used in the submission.

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  [SIZE=9pt]Armament[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Average[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE]
  
  [SIZE=9pt]Heavy Turbolasers x30[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Point Defense Lasers x70[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Proton Torpedos x2 launchers (30 each)[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Turbolaser Batteries x20 [/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Ion Cannons x15[/SIZE]
  

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[SIZE=9pt]Defenses[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Moderate [/SIZE]

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  [SIZE=9pt]Ion Shields[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Deflector Shields [/SIZE]
  

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[SIZE=9pt]Hangar Space[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Moderate ([/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]8[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Squadrons)[/SIZE]

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[SIZE=9pt]Hangar Allocations:[/SIZE]

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  [SIZE=9pt]Starfighters: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]6 squadrons[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Support Craft: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]2 squadrons[/SIZE]
  

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[SIZE=9pt]Maneuverability Rating[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Moderate [/SIZE]

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[SIZE=9pt]Speed Rating[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Average[/SIZE]

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[SIZE=9pt]Hyperdrive Class[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 1 [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Average [/SIZE]

When i put your ratings into THIS Spreadsheet (located in the available templates), it's coming out as "Extremely Overpowered". I can approve it with these ratings, but you might want to consider tinkering with a few of the ratings to better balance it out and hopefully avoid the likelihood of a future report in the RP world, that might not be a bad idea.

Please remember to tag me with any edits or clarifications you make to this sub

 

[Luca Donskoi]

[member="Malachi Smelone"], Any status on this?

 

[Luca Donskoi]

[member="Malachi Smelone"], this submission is being archived for inactivity

 

[Luca Donskoi]

Moved to Factory Archives - If you want to remove from the archives, please feel free to tag [member="Runi Verin"], [member="John Locke"] or [Member="Zef Halo"].