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First Order Mobile Asteroid Fortress Emancipator [Idea Discussion]

Ricochet

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I have discussed the possible construction of this idea with a lot of Factory Judges and I have discovered that after a lot of work, submission finagling and once we go major. It can be done. If submitted cleverly. I think such an idea (as described below) could lend to us great IC plots and fun. For example, we could mimic the secret construction of the Deathstar and have a thread that includes Military Advisor, First Order Officials, military personnel working on its secret development. It can be a great source of power and plot fun.

[member="Aram Kalast"] [member="Tmoxin Temi"] [member="Natasi Fortan"]​
[member="Daska Tess"] [member="Belis Ren"] [member="Sibar Laval"]​
[member="Carten Flaa"] [member="Kyle Amedis"]​
First Order Mobile Asteroid Fortress
EMANCIPATOR
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OOC Concept Introduction:
Seeing that the First Order as a minor faction is incapable of taking and holding a homeworld as a base, I began to wonder what would be a good remedy for such a deficiency for such a military/imperial expansionist faction. I had initially thought the First Order army could scout various worlds and establish a network of military bases for the fleet to move to if need be. That is why I came up with an up-coming campaign on Vassek – where in which at the behest of a greedy industrialist First Order is invited to conduct a military coup.

But, the idea struck me one day while working that the perfect “base” from which the homeless First Order fleet could operate from, is a massive asteroid base. But, the issue was making one that could house a fleet and be capable of Hyperdrive jumps and work within the rules set by the Factory Judges and the site’s Admins. The initial concept, is that the asteroid was being used by Vassek Industrialist as a mining base near a gas giant in their system for gas mining. As a part of the Vassek coup, First Order will take over the massive mining asteroid and over another dev thread militarize it. So you get two threads that IC’ly justify its existence – Vassek Coup (i.e. Asteroid take over) and then the Military Conversion Dev thread. So then I came with the idea that what I could do was submit the asteroid as a location and then dev thread its takeover to later justify its existence as a mobile asteroid fortress.

IC Concept Breakdown:

Name: Asteroid Gas Miner Station – Lagrange Grand (Original Commercial Name); First Order Mobile Asteroid Fortress Emancipator (Later First Order converted name)

Image Source: A Baoa Qu, Mobile Suit Gundam

Classification: Commercial Mining Asteroid (Original), Military Base (First Order)

Location: Vassek System, Wazta Sector, orbiting a gas giant (Original Static Location before conversion into mobile fortress)

Affiliation: Vassek Industrialist (Original), First Order (after coup on Vassek)

Population: Miners, Technicians, Starship crew members, Asteroid Facility Crew (Original), First Order Navy, Army and Fleet Command Staff (after Coup and Conversion)

Defenses: (Applicable only after First Order Coup of Vassek Thread is complete and Dev Thread for Mining Asteroid’s conversion, and after First Order goes Major)

First Order Mobile Asteroid Fortress Emancipator

Technical and Schematic Readout

The Emancipator is divided into two zones: A. the Disc and B. the Thorn

Naval Storage Feature:
The Emancipator is equipped with a large array of internal starcruiser and starfighter hangar bays. The great majority of which is built into the upper disc and the first half of the lower thorn. At its full capacity the asteroid can hold up to 1,500 Starcruisers and has a permanent garrison of 12 Starfighter Squadrons. Along with the hangar bay are built it maintenance facilities and dry docks for the cruisers and Starfighters to be serviced in.

Technical Features:
Technical
50 Hyperdrive Cores [Linked together into a Hyperdrive Matrix]
20 Large Ion Engines [Spread out across the asteroid’s length, for sub-Hyperdrive maneuvering]

Armor
Layer of Quadanium Steel built under the surface of the disc to reinforce the starship bays and hangars from piercing missile and beam hits. Other sections of the asteroid base which are of importance have a thick Quadanium steel armor lining beneath the rock surface of the asteroid

Defense Systems
10 Gravity Well Projectors [Stored in Lower Hemisphere of the Disc]
100 Tractor Beam Projectors [Spread out across the asteroid’s length]
200 Turbolaser Batteries [Spread out across the asteroid’s length, in rings]
200 Heavy Turbolaser Batteries [Spread out across the asteroid’s length, in rings]
100 Missile Launcher Bays [Spread out across the asteroid’s length]
- Concussion, Intruder, Cruise, Proton
 
[member="Ricochet"]

I love your continued creativity and efforts for the First Order! I think it is a great idea on all fronts. :)

(Your @mention though frustrates me :p )
 

Ricochet

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[member="Daska Tess"]

What I do?? OH MY @ mention, yah its annoying. None of my alts are working. Seems to be a site wide issue.
 
[member="Ricochet"]
If this can be a thing then you have my undivided attention in making it a reality. Only the other day I was sitting there going..."If only we could have a deathstar...only without the super laser. That would be so cool."

In all seriousness though, if we could make this work it would be a real deciding factor for our faction to push forward as we head for Major status. The building of a Asteroid Station capable of housing a fleet and our construction efforts would be an awesome IC and OOC point.
 

Ricochet

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[member="Aram Kalast"]

My sentiments exactly, the development threads alone plus the secret construction campaigns, the coup of Vassek, and the assault on the mining asteroid would generate a ton of IC participation. And OOC attention.

I may submit this to Codex Discussions to see what factory judges think if I have your permission. So they can all see it.
 

Ricochet

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Ok update. We've hit some snags with this idea. But it can be done. I just have to redesign a few things - and do a bit more research.

I still want to set up a physical Homebase that is well hidden enough for us not be bugged by GA or anybody else.

So for now I am going to submit a Ice Moon (like Starkiller's surface) as a Codex Location, hidden among a Kuiper Belt like asteroid field somewhere on the far edges of the Wazta Sector, i.e. where Vassek is. And that after the Vassek Campaign can be our physical permanent homebase until we go major. After we go major we can keep using it as a extra-territorial secret military base.

What do you guys think?

[member="Aram Kalast"] [member="Tmoxin Temi"] [member="Natasi Fortan"] [member="Daska Tess"] [member="Belis Ren"] [member="Sibar Laval"] [member="Carten Flaa"] [member="Kyle Amedis"]
 

Connor Harrison

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[member=Ricochet] I'm just like nodding dog. I nod, because you have the perfect plans.

Anything you need help with, just shout Dev wise at all.

:)



Major. It's coming closer...

*rubs hands*
 

Ricochet

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FIRST ORDER HOME BASE IMPERATOR ONE
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Name: Dinas Emrys (Original), Imperator One (First Order Codename)

Rotational Period: 120 hours

Orbital Period: 860 (Emrysian Days)

Classification: Moon

Diameter: 2372 Km (roughly same size as Pluto)

Atmosphere: Type I

Climate: Frozen, Tundra

Gravity: Standard Gravity (little less due to Emrys’ small size)

Primary Terrain: Frozen Tundra covering a thick layer of glacial ice, while inhospitable frozen poles in the north and south poles of the moon. Frequent snow storms and high winds. Sub-glacial rivers can be found cutting long networks of ice tunnels and caverns.

Native Species: TBD

Immigrated Species: Humans

Primary Languages: Galactic Basic

Government: Vassek Mining Corporation Base (Original), First Order (after Coup)

Population: TBD

Demonym: Imperator One

Major Imports: N/A

Major Exports: Steel Ores used in Durasteel, Transpirasteel and Hyper Steel Production (during active Mining Operations in the past)

Affiliation: Vassek Industrialists (Original), First Order (after Coup)

Major Locations: TBD

Culture: Military Base

Technology: Modern (Current Tech)

History: TBD

Notable PCs: TBD
Intent: TBD

Links: TBD
 
[member="Ricochet"]

I love your creativity but there has been a story going with Dosuun that has been getting invested in. Why reinvent the wheel... We need everyone on the same page I propose we focus on the asteroid for a sub, let the accounts come back, and then as a group we all pitch our ideas. We need three worlds to go major. And Dosuun, Lipseck, and Virgilla are strategic worlds when it comes to trade and economy.

Vessek is out of reach, but we can Dom it later. Anything we do now as minor only creates story. We've got to be writing the same story, and Dosuun was in works before you joined in all fairness. I'm not saying no to the idea, but I am saying we need to talk strategy if we are looking to go major.

Anyhow my two cents.
 
[member="Ricochet"] [member="Jaron Lesan"]
I am just voicing myself here.
At this point in time I feel the progress we are making with our scouts is great, we have engaged the enemy and have started to make a name for ourselves.
We are however still very much a MINOR faction.

Looking at the map, Dosuun, Lipseck, Virgilla and saying that Vessek are all so damn close that having issues over the choice of worlds at this point would be folly. Both ideas will be going ahead and the First Order will be making presence on both areas as they will several others. Upon our initiation into major we will look at where is the best suited for us, capitol it and then dom the rest of our already established territory in easy quick dominations that will take concentrated efforts by all.

In fact I love the idea of a practical 'station' world that is purely for our uses, especially as we can mould it to our ways, much like we can with Dosuun. Don't worry, all things will fit into place...it is a rather large galaxy after all.
 

Ricochet

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Oh!~ Nevermind then hahahaha. I wasnt aware of Dossun. Sure 'Im down. haha. I did Vassek originally just to give the military something to do. But I can put all my effort into Dossun. Btw I didn't propose any of this to take control, my language may be too enthusiastic- but they are just that suggestions and proposals :). I never do anything without the faction's consent -its why I just dump ideas first see reactions and I always tag faction admins. :) Its how I roll.

I will limit my base stuff to the asteroid then, it can be located near Dossun then, hell Imperator one could be a moon near Dossun and be used as a secret facility. You can put it literally anywhere near the 3 intended targets. In total I will do anything to align with your and the faction's wishes. NP~
 
[member="Ricochet"] I love the work your doing. LOVE IT!

In fact I do feel we should make this said moon, no matter where we put our home base. Let us advocate this, location submission it up and push heavily. I WANT MY DAMN MOON!!!!

"That Star Fighter is heading towards that small moon."
"That's no moon it's a..."
"No it's a moon."
"Yes it's a moon. We are all doomed."
 

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