Approved NPC First Wolves

[Ravenfire]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Spoiler

• Intent: To create the first wolves as a military group within the Fel Empire
• Image Credit: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/6ogwW
• Role: They are a strike team, specialised in taking down Force users
• Links: The Fel Empire, Dan Tray, helping-loose-the-unwanted, requisition-fel-imperium-militant, securing-hostile-intent

GENERAL INFORMATION

• Unit Name: First Wolves
• Affiliation: The Family, Dan Tray
• Classification: Special Ops
• Equipment: first-wolves-armour, g-11-shield-gauntlet, t-7-vibro-brace, pr-20, werewolf-machine-gun, n-4-probe-droid.

COMBAT INFORMATION

• Availability: Unique.
• Deployment: Limited.
• Strengths & Weaknesses:
• + Force dead - Due to the experiments to create this group they can't be affected by the force personally. However this doesn't extend to their equipment.
• + Strength and speed - The experiment doubled the strength and speed of the men and women within the first wolves.
• + Stealth - The First wolves are a stealth unit that generally specialise in assassinations and black ops missions.
• - Not air ready - this group is useless against air vehicles or attacks
• - Vong forming - Due to the high casualty rates during the experimentation done to them, not many of them survived to exist.
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  - Overwhelming numbers - small group, can be overwhelmed by sheer numbers
  
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  - Open areas at range - not well equipped to deal with open area combat at long range
  
• Description: The first wolves are an anti-force user assassination and black ops group. They came about due to experiments run by [member="Jaster of Clan Awaud"] during the helping-loose-the-unwanted thread. Also during this thread Dan Tray took command of the group due to his natural leadership qualities. During the thread Jaster used Vong shaping to make them force dead while also twice as fast and strong.
• Their training after that consisted of stealth courses as well as CQC and weapons training. Their functions are to act as agents of the Fel Empire killing any force users or political targets that the grand moff or the emperor deem necessary.

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Dan Tray"] Under review.

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Dan Tray"]

Hello there,

+ Force dead - Due to the experiments to create this group they can't be affected by the force personally.

This is fine, but I just want to make it clear that effects of this shaping treatment don't extend to any of their equipment.

- Vong forming - due to the experimentation done to them not many of them exist.

What does this mean?

During the thread Jaster used Vong shaping to make them force dead while also twice as fast and strong.

You're going to have to list the enhanced physical performance as a strength.

As it stands now, this submission is a little unbalanced. I'd like to see at least two more significant weaknesses to balances out the strengths you have listed, and that the deployment rate is reduced to limited.

 

[Ravenfire]

[member="Jyoti Nooran"]

Fixed so it doesn't extend to equipment.
Fixed it to talk about the high casualty rates of the experimentation mean that not many of them survive it.
Listed that other thing as a strength
Added two weaknesses and dropped them to limited.

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Dan Tray"]

Can you group the strengths and weaknesses together? It's hard to read them when they're mixed together.

 

[Ravenfire]

[member="Jyoti Nooran"]

Grouped and coloured them for your convenience

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Dan Tray"]

Thank you for the edits.

Approved, pending secondary.

 

[Zeradias Mant]

Approved.