Approved Starship Freedom Class Heavy Cruiser

[AD-8]

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[SIZE=9pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]

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  [SIZE=9pt]Intent: A ship for AD-8s fleet[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Image Source: [[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]x[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]][/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Canon Link: N/A[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Restricted Missions: N/A[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Primary Source: N/A[/SIZE]
  

[SIZE=9pt]PRODUCTION INFORMATION[/SIZE]

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  [SIZE=9pt]Manufacturer: AD Manufacturing[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Model: Freedom class Heavy Cruiser[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Affiliation: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]AD-8 [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Metal Lords[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Production: [/SIZE]Limited
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Material: Glasteel[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] (viewports),[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Durastee[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]l (Hull),[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Matrix Armour[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] (Hull)[/SIZE]
  

[SIZE=9pt]TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS[/SIZE]

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  [SIZE=9pt]Classification: Heavy Cruiser[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Length: 800 meters[/SIZE]
  
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  Width: 330m
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Height: 200m [/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Armament: [/SIZE]Very High
  

[SIZE=9pt]Long Range Turbolasershttp://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Long-range_turbolaser X100[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]XX-9 Heavy Turbolasershttp://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/XX-9_heavy_turbolaser X150[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]DBY-827 Heavy Turbolasershttp://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/DBY-827_heavy_dual_turbolaser_turret X150[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]XV7 Turbolasershttp://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/XV7_turbolaser X50[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]H9 Dual Turbolasershttp://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/H9_dual_turbolaser X25[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Heavy Warhead Launchers X20[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Flak Guns X20[/SIZE]

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  [SIZE=9pt]Defenses: [/SIZE]Moderate
  

[SIZE=9pt]Shieldinghttp://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Deflector_shield/Legends[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Reinforced Hull[/SIZE]

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  [SIZE=9pt]Hangar: 3[/SIZE]
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Maneuverability Rating: [/SIZE]Average
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Speed Rating: [/SIZE]Average
  
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  [SIZE=9pt]Hyperdrive Class: 1[/SIZE]
  

[SIZE=9pt]SPECIAL FEATURES[/SIZE]

• Ion Drives
• Hazard and Damage Control Systems
• Navigational Systems
• Sensors and Targeting Systems
• Communications Systems
• Tractor Beams
• Escape Pods

[SIZE=9pt]Strengths:[/SIZE]

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  The ships weaponry is heavy hitting and can deal massive damage if targeted properly.
  
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  The armour is relatively strong and is pretty easy to replace if damaged
  

[SIZE=9pt]Weaknesses:[/SIZE]

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  The Ship is vulnerable to attacks from the back due to lack of rear facing weapons.
  
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  The weapons installed to the ship can damage the armour and themselves after sustained fire.
  
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  The ships lack much anti fighter weaponry because most of the fighters it carries are bombers and there aren't enough flak guns to survive a sustained attack.
  

[SIZE=9pt]Description: AD-8s saw his fleet was lacking protection from attacks so he decided to develop a small number of ships to help him defend his people from pirates, rivals or whoever else had a bone to pick with him. He wanted a ship that would decimate enemies before any major damage could be sustained so as a result much of the weaponry is heavy hitting and long range. Although the ships are heavily armed they lack much anti fighter weaponry to free up space for capital guns and because the ship is designed to take on Large ships with its heavy hitting main weaponry so would rely on smaller support ships to cover it.[/SIZE]

 

[Ellie Mors]

Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.

 

[H3xle]

Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.

 

[H3xle]

[member="AD-8"]

Due to weather related difficulties, I will be taking this sub over. I am going to review it in the near future.

 

[H3xle]

[member="AD-8"]

Your Maneuverability is set to Average, but you have a strength listed stating it can maneuver fairly quickly.

I would say you can either bump your maneuverability up a degree, or remove that as a strength as they kind of conflict. Average will be better than some and worse than some, and wouldn't really qualify as a strength.

Weaknesses look pretty good to me, but I would like to see you flesh out the description a bit more. You mention the relative lack of anti-fighter weaponry, maybe you could go into the thought process for limited use against fighters. Maybe to have more room for more offensive weaponry and such.

 

[AD-8]

[member="Taryc Ap'Irae"]
Done

 

[H3xle]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Cira"]

 

[Jamie Pyne]

Approved.