General Feedback

[Ettiene Kharne]

Hey.....just wanting to see if I can get some feedback on both my character sheet and my writing since I'm still fairly new to the site and just now started this character's adventure here.

Character Sheet (Any feedback you want to give me here will be greatly appreciated)

Post (just ass with character sheet, any feedback here will be greatly appreciated.)

Thanks in advance as this is the only way I will get better.

 

[Srina Talon]

I very much so enjoy the Bio/History section. It's very detailed, and I feel, that if you keep up with it - It will only get better with time.

Your posts read rather nicely as well. Really, I just think more writing, will get you where you want to be. Exposure to different writing styles may also have an impact on your own. Different styles can really bring out some new flavor that you didn't even know you were missing.

[member="Alden Akaran"]