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Approved Starship Guardian Authority Ltd. - Starlight Cruiseline

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Faith is the heroism of the intellect.
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Civilian Cruise ship
  • Length: 10,000 Meters
  • Width: 3,500 Meters
  • Height: 2,200 Meters
  • Crew: 63,700 Total Crew
    • 25,000 Enlisted (Comms, Operations, Navigation, Engineering)
    • 4,000 Officers (Command, Engineering, Comms, Pilots)
    • 4,500 Medical (Sickbays[12], Mobile, Emergency)
    • 3,500 Air Group (Deck, Fueling, Launch, Landing, Engineering, Rescue, Pilots)
    • 7,000 Security
    • 3,000 Entertainment
    • 7,000 Culinary/Restaurant/Food & Beverage
    • 9,700 Miscellaneous
  • Armament: None
  • Defenses: Extreme
  • Hangar Space: Extreme: 102
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: 0 squadrons
    • Support Craft: 102 squadrons (transports and personal craft with 12 hangars allocated for security and local law enforcement)
  • Maneuverability Rating: Low (Very Low with Nimble-5 Boost engaged, Average when Gulfstream Maneuvering System Engaged)
  • Speed Rating: High(Very High when Nimble-5 boost engaged, Average when Gulfstream Maneuvering system engaged)
  • Hyperdrive: 2.0
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • BULWARK: Like many traditional mon calamari capital ship designs, the Dreamweaver sports redundant shielding which makes it quite difficult for attacks to penetrate the hull. Aside from this shielding, she also sports exceptional armor as well as the robust Aegis II Anti-Concussion Field Generator and molecular shields. Make no mistake, The Dreamweaver is not a combat vessel, but she can take more than a few hits and get out of the area safely.
  • SWIFT: The Dreamweaver is unusually fast for a vessel its size, which sometimes even allows the Star Defender to swiftly move in and out of systems especially when its boost function is utilized. An unusual hyperdrive booster allows the Dreamweaver to be one of the fastest vessels of its size for superluminal travel.
  • ADAPTABLE: The Dreamweaver is a massive investment of capital and infrastructure, and in order to ensure that this investment remains well-spent over the years to come, the 'Weaver has both subsystems designed to be inherently adaptable on their own as well as modularity designed to allow it to receive future plug-and-play upgrades.
WEAKNESSES
  • UNWIELDLY: The Dreamweaver is not a very maneuverable starship even for a ship its size.
  • VULNERABLE ADVANCED SYSTEMS: Like the classic Strike Cruiser, these modular fastenings are more prone to experiencing damage than traditional ship frameworks and joints, making it more likely that these systems will be knocked offline from battle damage.
  • UNABLE TO DOCK ANYWHERE: The ship is just too big and must rely on shuttles and special transports when approaching planets, shipyards (she was built in one designed specifically for her), and planetary landings.
DESCRIPTION
When most people think of Dagobah, they think "swamp" and they're right. When they view the forests of Endor and see the wildlife, they do not think about putting a resort there, one that tailors to the environment, but when Caltin Vanagor thought about this, he took one of the few moments to be "hands-on" in his majority ownership of Guardian Authority Ltd. He wanted to build something that could bring this to those who could not see it for themselves.

When most people think of Mon Calamari or "Dak", they think of "Waterworld", Naboo is to them more of a "chain of lakes" and they're right. What Vanagor saw when he first looked at the planets? He saw possibilities. He saw children playing in the snow, he saw hot tubs outside where couples could sit and watch the sunset in a combination of cold and warmth. He saw friends sipping cocktails by a fireplace, most of all he saw skiing. He saw yachting, he saw waterparks, he saw beaches. He saw someone try this previously and fail horribly due to the need to adhere to planetary governments and develop relationships getting permits. Vanagor saw a way around this though. He wanted to bring this to the people, not help them go to it. That is when the big man came up with the idea for a Cruise ship from the inside out. From the technological marvel that is the main lobby to the glass enclosure growing all of the vegetables the resort could need each day inside to the suites carved out of ice, this resort is not one of many, it is once of a kind.

Say "Hello" to "The Dreamweaver"

In what has to be the single largest undertaking he or his company will ever embark on the cruise ship was born. In a partnership with Lucerne Labs, with designers from Mon Calamari Shipyards, The Dreamweaver was built by mobile shipyards in Deep Space this was the very first asset of "Guardian Authority Ltd." played close to the chest until the final design stages. It was when he was "tasting" various potential restaurants and menus that the big man came up with the plan to run with the joke from Romi Jade Romi Jade and create "Cooking with Caltin".

Corporations can book their meetings here with one of the largest Exhibit halls on the planet but that's not all. With eighteen different types of shops, including Haute' Couture clothiers (3), swimwear, and trinkets, one could find a unique memento. Don't know what you're looking for? Want to explore the luxury planets or any of the stops for that matter? This ship offers the largest shuttle tour and rental facility. You can rent a simple family-style or something sleek and sporty. Want to just relax? Lounge out at one of our enormous grotto pools. or our spa(just off of the full-service gym) featuring hot tubs, aromatherapy, and massage. What better way to work off the meals you could enjoy at one of our many 4 star restaurants. 4 star not your speed? Have a family? We have family-style, we have quick service restaurants too. For those quiet nights in, our room service is second to none. Want a new guilty pleasure. Try one of our three "Gaulph Courses", each of the 18 holes of fun and jovial frustration.
 
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Caltin Vanagor Caltin Vanagor

Nicely made! However I found some problems, this time I'll not mention the unbalanced part, because of the strengths and weakness list it looks like it was intentional. If not, please let me know, when you answer.
  • You forget to add the Canon Link to your template, please fix it.
  • This is only a civilian SSD, so please add the Market Status back to your template.
  • The Comscans' link is broken, please fix it or remove from your list.
  • And you can't use the Sith Empire 'Torrential' Hyperdrive Booster without permission. Gir's permission is not enough to this. You need Jon's permission. So please ask this or delete the item to your list.
 
Faith is the heroism of the intellect.
Okay you MANIAC MANIAC
  • Fixed the Canon Link
  • Same with Market Status
  • Removed the Booster (felt it made the weakness a contradiction in terms)
  • Fixed Comscans
  • Edited one weakness (it read incorrectly)
  • Edited the speed from Very High to High
  • Wondering how off on the power level this is. ;)
 
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Caltin Vanagor Caltin Vanagor

Thanks! However, the original speed rating is now missing:
Speed Rating: (High when Nimble-5 boost engaged, Average when Gulfstream Maneuvering system engaged)
So currently I don't know your ratings, but those were underpowered (-2) originally, before you edited them.
 
Faith is the heroism of the intellect.
I wish you could see my face right now, MANIAC MANIAC (okay, maybe not, you might get grossed out, heh) but I am blinking rapidly out of sheer and complete disbelief right now that I honestly thought that I did this.

Oh well, fixed now.
 
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Oh yeah, you MANIAC MANIAC ? Well, NOW it's -1 as I changed the speed back to her original setting and upped the squadrons to Extreme! (Reading this, I feel like a stadium announcer calling Monster Jam) ;)

Waits for confirmation that he probably screwed up the numbers and made it +1 or something.
 
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