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Approved NPC Guardians (Lujian Elite Force Guards)

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Unit Name: Guardians
  • Affiliation: Kalie Alverez (Tiresh Kobitana), Planet of Lujo, Kobitana Industries, Ashmaarians
  • Classification: Force Sensitive Elite Guards
  • Description: These guards are quite impressive to behold, especially due to the wing-like armor shield on their backs. They are quiet, always alert, and trained with royal etiquette. They take their job incredibly seriously, desiring to keep their assignments safe at all costs, even at the expense of their own lives.
COMBAT INFORMATION:
  • Unit Size: Small
  • Unit Availability: Unique
  • Unit Experience: Elite
  • Equipment: Double-bladed Lightsaber, Winged Guardian V1 Armor
  • Combat Function:
    • Force users trained specifically to counter the dark arts using defensive saber combat.
      • Force Abilities
        • Force Push
        • Force Pull
        • Force Jump
        • Force Blinding
        • Force Light
        • Force Healing
        • Battlemind
        • Revitalize
    • Elite guards trained to be present around dignitaries and royalty.
    • Defensive wing shields to protect their assignments from incoming attacks.
Strengths:
  • Always Vigilant. The are always on high alert when on duty, taking the protection of their targets as their highest priority.
  • Advanced Training. They receive highly specialized and elite training as a unit, making them a formidable opponent to cross.
  • Ultimate Sacrifice. They are prepared to lay down their lives on behalf of those they are protecting.
  • Ashmaarian Perks. Phenomenal swimmers, they can hold their breath for as long as 10 minutes while underwater and can swim at speeds of up to 30 miles per hour. They also have a natural armor of hardened peals inside their skin.
  • Wing Defense. The interlinking shield plating can fully extend outward in the shape of wings, creating a large shield that can deflect a greater radius against incoming attacks and projectiles. When utilizing this defensive posture with multiple units, Guardians can effectively create an interlinking Phrik wall, protecting dignitaries, civilians, or other vulnerable members from an attack.
Weaknesses:
  • Manipulatable. Due to the Ashmaarian's humble and uncultured roots, they are often less "experienced" on the galactic scene. This, combined with their high morals, makes them vulnerable to deception.
  • Ranged Weapons. They are not trained in how to use ranged weapons.
  • Offense. They are trained to hold off and withstand attacks, not so much to engage in any form of offensive or evasive maneuvers.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
After the defeat of Coruscant by the Brotherhood of the Maw, Tiresh Kobitana, the Senator of Lujo, gathered the houses and the High Patriarch of the Ashmaarians together to discuss how they could best take steps to protect their planet and way of life form any such attacks. It was decided that they would develop their own planetary fleet and armed forces, calling it the Lujian Forces. Tiresh brought in her business partner and father, Marovik Kobitana, to help them develop the Lujian forces with their exclusive company, Kobitana Industries, as well as with the financial backing of the Kobitana Foundation and a new lucrative venture by the planet of Lujo to humanly harvest Ashmaarian Pearls from the indigenous species. They also took advantage of the Galactic Alliances offer for financial aid to planetary systems. And so the Lujian Forces began to be developed quickly.

The High Patriarch of the Ashmaarians insisted that a majority of the armed forces be made up of members of his own species, ensuring that they would truly carry and represent the values of the Ashmarrians and of Lujo. And so it was agreed to, meaning that most of the Lujian Guardians are ethnically Ashmaarian, while those who are not are active residents of Lujo by requirement. While primarily intended for the defense of Lujo, the Lujian Forces are also called upon to come to the aid of other systems within the Galactic Alliance.

The Guardians were Elite Force Guards used to protect VIP's, dignitaries, senators, royalty, and even evacuate civilians and at-risk groups in the midst of chaotic war zones. They quickly proved to be an extremely affective defensive measure, saving countless lives in the line of service.

They are equipped with Winged Guardian V1 Armor developed by Kobitana Industries, which has state-of-the-art sensors and an advanced communication HUD, allowing for detection of possible enemies from as far as 100 feet in any direction. The HUD display can even show heat signatures through walls, bulkheads, and other obstacles, making it very hard to catch Guardians off guard. With the unique and proprietary rear-guard interlinking shield plating made of Phrik, it is nearly impossible to effectively assault Guardians from behind. These plates could extend out in a wing-like defensive state, creating a Prik barrier to help protect people from incoming fire. When utilized as a squad, this wing defense could be used together in tandem to create an interlocking wall, very effective for protecting larger groups of people.
 
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Ylla Caeli'runa

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Hello Lujian Forces Lujian Forces ! Lovely sub you've got here. I love seeing new Force Sensitive groups/units! However, there are three main things I'd like to address:

Equipment | With ratings of Small and Rare, this unit is able to use equipment rated as Limited, Minor, and/or Mass-Produced.​
Currently, the Winged Guardian V1 Armor is rated at Semi-Unique.​
To remedy this, you can either:​
  • Remove the Winged Guardian Armor and replace it with armor that's rated at Limited (with permissions, if necessary).
  • Change the Unit Availability to Unique so that you can use Semi-Unique rated Equipment. However, you would only have one "unit" (however you define that here) available from deployment at a time.
  • Request a Submission Modification from the Factory and lower the Production value to Limited. This may require some tweaking on your part in order to balance the ratings out to adjust to the new production value.

Force Abilities | Because this is a Force User Unit, are there any notable abilities/powers that the Guardians are able to wield/utilize in their line of service? If so, please list them here. Be sure to link any uncommon/rare abilities, if there are any.​

Strengths & Weaknesses | Most of these seem to be pulled from the Winged Guardian Armor sub. While that's great that you're accounting for that, strengths & weaknesses should also cover the unit itself and the behavior of the people in it. The majority of these will also be void if you decide to use a Limited set of armor in place of the Winged Guardian.​
Maybe strengths could be that they are always vigilant, high level/hard training that makes them elite, willing to lay down their lives to protect their charges, or maybe they have an advantage of Lujo because they are either Ashmaarian or a Lujo resident. Possible weaknesses could also include loyalty to a fault or a lack of training with ranged weaponry.​
Feel free to tag me with any questions/concerns you might have or once edits have been completed!
 
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