Approved NPC Gurh'urrs'raur

[Mugiwara no Luffy]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a somewhat peaceful NPC Jedi who can interact with others.
• Image Credit:
• Role: He will offer advice and some training to those he takes a liking to.
• Permissions: N/A
• Links: N/A

PHYSICAL INFORMATION

• Age: 38
• Force Sensitivity: Master
• Species: Tusken Raider
• Appearance: He is a tall and well-built man Tusken Raider. He stands at 6'02 and wears layers of brown robes with his leather mask tightly attached to his head.

SOCIAL INFORMATION

• Name: Gurh'urrs'raur
• Loyalties: N/A
• Wealth: N/A
• Notable Possessions: Gurh'urrs'raur wields a unique lightsaber, the hilt is fashioned from a Rancor tooth with intricate designs etched into it.
• Skills: He is a master swordsman, gunman, thief and tracker.
• Languages: Binary and Tusken.
• Personality: He is a calm and passionate man but is extremely violent as well. He treats he friends and his enemies very differently.

COMBAT INFORMATION

• Weapon of Choice: Gurh'urrs'raur's Lightsaber
• Combat Function: He is no stranger to combat and will fight if he has to. Though the sands of the Dune Sea usually push him into a battle.
• Force Abilities: Force Slow, Force push/pull, Force lightning and Force choke.

STRENGTHS

1. Skilled Swordsman: He is well-trained with a lightsaber and used to life-or-death combat.
2. One with the Force: He is a powerful Force User, able to utilize several Force Powers.
3. Son of the Sands: He has grown up in the sands of Tatooine and can easily navigate through the Dune Sea.

WEAKNESSES

1. Untrusting: He doesn't trust outsiders and likes to put them through grueling trials before he starts to even think about trusting them.
2. True Neutral: He is at a neutral level with the Force. He chooses to stay out of major conflicts and let's the galaxy proceed as it is destined to.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Gurh'urrs'raur was born to a vicious tribe of Tusken Raiders and was raised to be a fierce warrior. His Force Sensitivity was realized and he was soon visited by a handful of Force Ghosts. The spirits guided him through his Force Training and helped him construct his first lightsaber, helping him on his path to become a Jedi. He quickly became the leader of his tribe, living as a Gray Jedi in the wastes of the Dune Sea.

 

[Mugiwara no Luffy]

The Mongrel

 

[The Mongrel]

Under Review Mugiwara no Luffy

No need to tag me on new submissions. I'm only one of the judges. Tag me if you've completed edits that I asked for; otherwise, just post the submission, and one of us will get to it when we can.

For this submission, my main concern is the Historical Information section. This character is a Jedi Master, but he was never trained by a Jedi? He built a lightsaber without ever meeting a Jedi? That is not going to work. You cannot become the Pope without ever meeting someone who is Catholic. This character can be a generic Force master if you want, but he cannot be a Jedi without receiving actual Jedi training.

 

[Mugiwara no Luffy]

The Mongrel
What an interesting example lol

I added Jedi Instructors to the Historical Information

 

[The Mongrel]

Works for me. Approved.