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Approved Location HC-Void Rift

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

SETTING INFORMATION
  • Rift Name: HC-Void Rift
  • Rift Alignment: light
  • Location: Hades Corp HQ on planet Fondor
  • Destination: The Rift leads to a lush jungle area of Oblivion ruins of a unknown civilization covered in vegetation and otherworldly fauna. In the distance a temple could be seen towering above the ruins and seems to be were the ruins started from. the further you get from the temple the more dilapidated and overgrown with vegetation the ruins become.
  • Direction: both directions
  • Size: Medium
  • Accessibility: The Rift is guarded within a Hades Corp compound with restricted access to Hades Corp and its allies or those contracted to help.
  • Description: Located in one of the many mines within Fondor is a Giant face with mouth agape in almost a yawn the material of the face seems as smooth as metal but all attempts at being able to get a sample of the mineral that makes up this face seems impossible. within the mouth is a glowing blue rift. the location itself is heavily guarded by Hades Corp personnel and other merc forces. Metal gates and fencing surround the caves and area leading to the face.
  • Donations/Supporters/Investors: Ellie Omera : For a years shipment of food stuffs for the forces of hades corp Thursday at Mya Jesel. : For raw materials and worker help in setting up a outpost in a submission.

RIFT EFFECTS

Effects of traveling threw said rift are both positive and negative. Beings who travel through the rift may experience ocular glow as their natural eye color is replaced with a dim whitish blueish glow. As well as the possibility to experience the ability to use telepathy for communication. these individuals while using the rift or remaining in the netherworld location might find it impossible to speak vocally and would most likely only talk via their mind.
This also means that a fair amount of concentration is required to communicate as all thoughts made by individuals would be broadcasted in the individual's immediate area as if they were speaking to them at normal volumes. An acute sensitivity to light due to the ocular glow while in the daylight has also been reported to be a possible effect however when the location cycles to night the individuals would be able to see in total darkness as if they had a flashlight and in lowlight as if they were in a well-lit room.

POINTS OF INTEREST
Hades Corp HQ: A remote mining station in the outer territory of Fondor brimming with activity as various military drills and troops move to and frow. shipments of both troops and materials coming in and out of the mining station that was repurposed into Hades Corp main HQ. Located in one of the many mines within this area is a Giant face with mouth agape in almost a yawn the material of the face seems as smooth as metal but all attempts at being able to get a sample of the mineral that makes up this face seems impossible. within the mouth is a glowing blue rift. the location itself is heavily guarded by Hades Corp personnel and other merc forces. Metal gates and fencing surround the caves and area leading to the face.

Rift ruins: A lush jungle with varying colors of greens and blues making up the vegetation and fauna covers the ruins of a long dead or forgotten civilization. once traveling through this rift individuals will find themselves in the mouth of a different face on the edge of these ruins. at the base of the rift portal is a Hades Corp outpost built using raw materials with various researchers, guards and expedition crews manning the outpost.

Rift temple: Getting to the temple has proven difficult with the large amount of vegetation and hazards in the form of ruins finding a way to it at the moment has seemed rather difficult. however given that it seems to be the epicenter of the ruins it towers above everything and from a distance seems to shine as bright as gold in the light of the sun.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The history of the rift at this time is still shrouded in mystery as up until recently its been a inactive face found in a mine on Fondor however after the Omni crisis with the oblivion battle the rift seemed to have come to life. the reason for this is still unknown to hades corp however the various memebers of the board deemed it nessisary to to send in scouting parties into the location first. however out of the 3 scouting parties originally sent in one of them didnt return.

with the influx of capital from trade goods and services hades corp with the help of the Rimworld Trade league has managed to get the materials and ability to begin research and expidtions into the rift. to learn what they can from the unknown of this place. and if they could in the future see what the fruits of their labor provide...or what dangers lie ahead.
 
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:: HERO of KORRIBAN ::
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001-A-986 "Nix" 001-A-986 "Nix"

Looking over your submission here, and I am a bit confused with your permissions.

First you placed text in a spoiler which according to the Codex guidelines is not permitted. See the rule here:

Spoiler and Tabs BB-Code are prohibited. (Exception: Images can be in spoilers.)

Second, there is nothing you are providing the permissions for which fall under the requirements for citing permission. If this were, one thing that is definitely missing is the actual permission from the other writers that your transfer satisfies the agreement. I am just going to ask you to remove it for now.

One option you do have would be to add a field that says Donations/Supporters/Investors... something to that effect.

The other thing I am going to ask you to do is make sure your language in the Rift Effects section leaves room for the writer to decide whether they experience it or not. Rather than saying they WILL experience x y and z please change it to something like they MAY experience x y and z... or may likely... something that gives the writer that wiggle room.

I love the concept! Ping me when you are ready!
 
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