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Approved NPC Hellena "Kinta Saud"

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: 27 GSY
  • Force Sensitivity: Master
  • Species: Zabrak
  • Appearance: Five foot eight inches tall, Hellena has rather short hair. Kept just a tad shorter than what would be considered a pixie cut. She is a lean build with a slightly muscular frame. Built more like a swimmer.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Hellena(Birth Name), Kinta Saud(Given name), Scourge of Iridonia
  • Loyalties: The Red Ravens(Fomerly), The Sith Empire(Formerly), The Imura Family(Formerly), Ignis Imura
  • Wealth: TBD
  • Notable Possessions: Double Bladed Lightsaber, Boots, Vinculum Ring attached to Ignis and Caleo.
  • Skills:
    ​Sith Alchemy
  • Fire Shaping
  • Air Shaping
  • Sith Lightning
  • Telekiensis

[*]Personality: In the past she acted more upon instinct and valued herself above all others. Forced as the apprentice and slave of Nickolas, and was then passed on as some object to Ignis, She was not happy and thus had an anger and hatred towards the young man at first. However, as the two have worked together, they seemed to be able to understand one another a little more easily, and Kinta even takes a sisterly, or even in some cases a motherly role for Ignis. She takes care of Ignis as though he were her own child and thus stays with him even if he used to own her and removed her life debt. She trusts Ignis with her life, and still feels like she owes him her life, even though he has told her that she has her own free will, and may do as she pleases. Being free, she has shown much more control of herself towards those who work with Ignis considering his personal connections with the Je'daii in secret.
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Weapon of Choice: The Force, Double-Bladed Lightsaber
  • Combat Function: Master Double bladed lightsaber duelist, Well versed in the force and its usage of Shaping arts, Telekinesis, and Alchemy. Wears a ring that allows telepathy, even in combat. Is completely loyal to Ignis, and would do just about anything for him. Various scars cause her moderate pain when struck, Left ear is partly deaf, Missing her left hand Ring finger, and her right hand pinky finger. Allergic to Bacta, requiring other forms of healing, Not a physically imposing fighter. She is rather weak compared to many other fighters on the field physically. Flashbacks caused by triggers can happen at any moment. This can be anything from just seeing a memory, to a full fledged, terror inducing flashback that she will react to, when it is not there, or in the present time.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Born on Iridonia, Hellena was the youngest of three children. An older sister, and an older brother. She was the runt of the three. Always lagging behind everyone else. Taking everything for granted, and spoiled by her parents. However, it was during this time, Her parents had taken the kids on a family vacation off of Iridonia to Dantooine. However, things would go south. Truth was, Hellena's parents were wanted by a Hutt for taking out a loan, and never returned the credits. Bounty hunters came to pick them up, or deal with them. Ending badly, The parents were killed by the bounty hunters, and the son was left to die on Dantooine with the two sisters being brought in as slaves.

Returning to Nar Shaadda, The two sisters had to work together to appease the Hutt. Becoming a waitress for Hellena, and a dancer for her sister. Over the years, Hellena had learned to protect herself by pure will alone against bounty hunters who got a little too touchy. Learning how to fight with knives, shivs, even vibro blades and blasters to keep herself, and her sister alive. It was during a take over by a rival gang that Hellena took her once chance to escape. However, her sister was caught. It is unknown what happened to her sister, but she can only fear the worst. It was during this time that She fled. Making her way to the Red Ravens and joining up with them. It is here she met Nickolas. A brooding Sith Knight who had protected her from enslavement once more. Only, to become the slave, and apprentice of this man. She vowed her life to him, and thus the two travled together.

A Zabrak Apprentice to Nick Imura, The girl is the loyal servant who owes a life debt to him. After taking her from her slave life upon Nar Shaadda, Nick began to teach her the ways of Shaping, Alchemy, and the force in general. Trained to use a ligthsaber with a very high proficiency, The woman is well known for her usage of the double bladed lightsaber, and as well as single bladed combat. She took a liking to use various Sith Magic powers as Lightning, and even Alter Environment to fight with her saber prowess. Kinta has taken the name given to her by Nick as a sign of her new life. Derived from the Sith for "Black Flame." A name fitting for her black and red skin tones. As well as her burning desire to become a real Sith.

She is ever growing. Becoming more stronger as the days pass by. While Nick may be the Dark Prince of Kro Var, Kinta is only now coming to understand, why he is called as such. During Nick's time away, She was sent on tasks to create her own lightsaber. Using two Qixoni Crystals to increase her affinity with the weapon. The girl is slowly getting closer and closer to defeating her own Master. Then she will become a True Sith Lady.

It was only that her plans were changed. Nick had returned to Kro Var to drop Kinta off to Ignis. Being told that her new commands as his apprentice and slave were to be a companion of Ignis. To aid him in whatever he chooses to do, and that while she was there to watch over him, she was ultimately under his command as if Ignis was Nick himself. Now, she is a companion of Ignis. However, the young man does not want to be his father, or act like him. He wants to become something better. For that, he had released Kinta from her bond, and allowed her to be a free person. She stayed with him even thought she hated his want's and desires, because she saw much more in him.
 
Not sure if this was moved to WIP section?

Either way, I would like for this to be moved to the NPC creation forum.

[member="Darth Pyrrhus"], [member="Samka Derith"], [member="Mahet"], [member="Taeli Raaf"],
 
[member="Ignis Imura"]

Plenty of detail and history here for people to interact with, but I am gonna need you to balance out her power a bit before I can stamp this. NPC Force Masters are not on the same level as PC ones and that needs to be reflected in the powers she knows, her strengths and weaknesses.

I'd suggest removing a couple of powers and add some more pronounced weaknesses to her.
 
[member="Jairus Starvald"],

Removed two of the Shaping powers, and Force Destruction. I also removed mention of these abilities from the Combat function, and anywhere else I could find them.

Added Bacta Allergy, Weaker physically, and Flashbacks that can range from a simple memory to TerrorFlashes that cause her to react to them when they are otherwise not there.

Thank you for judging my submission!
 
[member="Ignis Imura"]

With the addition of the weaknesses and removal of several powers I have no issue stamping this. NPC with plenty of establishment in writing already, a strong Force Master without actually threatening to rival PC Masters.

Nothing wrong with that.

Enjoy!
 
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