Approved NPC High General

[Jaster Awaud]

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Name: High General

Intent: Have a leader of a Shadow Legion Planet

Affiliation: Shadow Legion

Availability: Limited

Quality: B

Type: Planetary Leader, Command Unit

Strength: 1 per planet controlled

Description:
High Generals are members of the Shadows Legions Secret Membership. They give up their identities and become a member of some kind of legit business on the planet they occupy. They are not in positions of being notices, but instead occupy areas where they can control from the shadows. Often these generals would become Space Port Managers or Accountants instead of the Ports Owner or CEO of a planets Company. This allowed them to blend in, and only their location would be revealed to only the highest officers of the Sargent of the Legionnaires, thus keeping him in the shadows. It would take weeks to months before a General properly establishes the presence of the Shadow Legion. As soon as the general’s feet touch the planet’s surface, it is almost guaranteed that a Dark Intelegence Cell will be created. The Dark Intelegence Cell will then bring the planet under the Shadow Legion Syndicate sphere of influence.

The High General is trained only in leadership and marksmanship abilities, as they are usually protected by the local Dia Sha-Dow Agents along with the Intelligent Officers he surrounds himself with. He is only expected to keep the planet under the control of the Shadow Legion, the Dealers and Agents actually keep the syndicates goods moving along. The main thing that High Generals are taught before being assigned a planet, is never give the local authorities a reason to investigate the Shadow Legion. If they do though, the Generals are to kill them, and cover up any trace of the Legion.

Links:
Armor, Sidearm, Rifle, and Hidden Blaster

 

[Darth Prazutis]

[member="Tydus Wryeens"]

Under Review.

 

[Darth Prazutis]

[member="Tydus Wryeens"] | [member="Silencia"]

Approved Pending Secondary

 

[Quietus]

I have one issue with this submission:

As soon as the general’s feet touch the planet’s surface, it is guaranteed that the planet will become under the control of the Shadow Legion.

Let's not deal in absolutes. Only Sith do that. Please change the wording of the red portion to something along the lines of "the effort to take control for the Shadow Legion commences."

[member="Tydus Wryeens"]
[member="Darth Prazutis"]

 

[Jaster Awaud]

[member="Silencia"]

Guess I was a little over zealous. None the less, edited. Hope that is more acceptable.

 

[Quietus]

This is guaranteed as long as it keeps contact with the leadership and their cover is not destroyed.

You replaced one absolute with another. The reason I am asking you to change this is due to the very likely fact that one day the Shadow Legion will end up on a planet run by someone else or under someone else's jurisdiction. It's all too easy to take advantage of words through smoke and mirrors. Get rid of the quoted sentence above and we'll be good to go.

[member="Tydus Wryeens"]

 

[Jaster Awaud]

[member="Silencia"]

I think I might have cleared up where the idea of conflict, clarified. The High Generals are a criminal element, they aren't planned for goin Major. If this is still not clarified I will change again.

Edited*

 

[Quietus]

This is better.

Approved.