History of the E.X.O

[Malcom Hubber]

During revans control of the sith he ordered his scientists to create an army of bio-organic soldiers this lead to the creation of the E.X.O early tests showed promise until the scientists took it to far and tried to take the emotion & free will from the E.X.O this lead to the E.X.O uprising the E.X.Os marched on the sith the battle was intense but the sith won the day fue E.X.Os survived the ones that did went into voluntary exile some even left known space

So that's the story of the E.X.O tell me how I could make it better

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Black Bolt"]
This site is set nearly 5000 years after Revan lived.

I'm not sure how applicable that story is for this board.

 

[Malcom Hubber]

These guys are still around and I know that this is way after Revan but I'm going to create a character with this species

 

[Ellie Mors]

These guys are still around and I know that this is way after Revan but I'm going to create a character with this species

I think this conversation/brainstorming belongs more in the Codex Discussion, as species are submitted there.