Se-khem-ka
The Desert Shadow
Lookin for some opinions on my new character: Se-khem-ka.
Star Wars Roleplay: Chaos
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Sanya Val Lerium
Neutral, Queen of Her people, Neko
You look fabulous darling
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Se-khem-ka
The Desert Shadow
Why thank you, [member="Sanya Val Swift"]
Nymeria Vizsla
Wolf on Fire
You know I like him, love the species.
Dune Rhur
Freedon's Nadds
Your species is quite cool, but I have a small issue with the strengths and weaknesses.
Okay, so he's gigantic (over 7' tall and close to 330lbs, basically a pro wrestler) and naturally he's strong and durable. But he's also a great tactical thinker too? I'm not saying he has to be be a drooling moron, but considering that he's apparently very strong in the Force as well, it feels like overkill.
The issues with cold environments is actually weakness that could make for some interesting writing. But, in all honestly, there are a lot of writers who slot not being good with guns or flying as a weakness and it's really not that big of a deal. I say that because he has the Force and will probably fight in melee range and how often are there dogfights in star fighters outside invasions/dominions?
Other than that, I wanted to add your avatar is fantastic.
Okay, so he's gigantic (over 7' tall and close to 330lbs, basically a pro wrestler) and naturally he's strong and durable. But he's also a great tactical thinker too? I'm not saying he has to be be a drooling moron, but considering that he's apparently very strong in the Force as well, it feels like overkill.
The issues with cold environments is actually weakness that could make for some interesting writing. But, in all honestly, there are a lot of writers who slot not being good with guns or flying as a weakness and it's really not that big of a deal. I say that because he has the Force and will probably fight in melee range and how often are there dogfights in star fighters outside invasions/dominions?
Other than that, I wanted to add your avatar is fantastic.
Katelyn Feanor
Two sides of a singular coin
[member="Se-khem-ka"]
Love me my Anubis people
Love me my Anubis people
Se-khem-ka
The Desert Shadow
[member="Dune Rhur"]
I didn't even make the species, just followed a bit of the structure. The Anubians are very intelligent.
[member="Astrid"]
Thanks doll
I didn't even make the species, just followed a bit of the structure. The Anubians are very intelligent.
[member="Astrid"]
Thanks doll
Taa Nul
CEO of Kamigen Incorporated
The first of many Anubians, I hope. I'm really glad people are already using my race! <3