Alkor Centaris
Son of Liberty
Good? Bad? Indifferent? Ugly?
Let me know.
I'm unafraid of criticism.
Let me know.
I'm unafraid of criticism.
Star Wars Roleplay: Chaos
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How's my driving?
- Thread starter Alkor Centaris
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[member="Alkor Centaris"]
Pls color ur character's dialogue
Pls
Pls color ur character's dialogue
Pls
M E A T B A G
You're hogging the left lane.
I approve.
I approve.
She Left Behind A Legacy
[member="Alkor Centaris"]
*Rolls eyes*
Waiting for us to write together jerk.
*Rolls eyes*
Waiting for us to write together jerk.
Eternal Father
*Gently slides over a crate of alcohol.*
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Keira Priest
The Iron
I have a single critique: since when did Alkor become the voice of reason in the clan?
Other than that, I don't think I have anything as far as bad stuff goes. I know the last time I brought up bringing more emotion into the character and showing the other sides of him, and since then you've done a phenomenal job at just that. Everything about his arc continues to feel very natural and progresses smoothly, with nothing coming as a surprise or seeming out of character. You're doing A+ as far as I'm concerned.
[member="Alkor Centaris"]
Other than that, I don't think I have anything as far as bad stuff goes. I know the last time I brought up bringing more emotion into the character and showing the other sides of him, and since then you've done a phenomenal job at just that. Everything about his arc continues to feel very natural and progresses smoothly, with nothing coming as a surprise or seeming out of character. You're doing A+ as far as I'm concerned.
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Kurayami Bloodborn
Drunken Savant
After so long of writing with you, and having read countless posts, I have always found Alkor to be and interesting read and compelling character. Gotta say that you have kept him similar enough to what I remembered him as while bringing new depth to him on Chaos. Keep up the good work.
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Alkor Centaris
Son of Liberty
We should! I'm all for threads.Romi Jade said:
Darth Vyrassu
Immortal Jen'ari Sith Emperor
You get your drivers license from a prize in cereal? You've hit like 30 other cars, and quit hogging the lane. Crayola license boy lol